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rango newbie!

Joined: Apr 16, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 10:37 pm Post subject: my second drawing |
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im a newbie so i will like u's to give me some advice and to tell me if its good.
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:39 am Post subject: |
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really cute! i really like the chick or chicken at the bottom. Continue to work hard! your drawings are very cute, coloring and shading them would be a good idea for consideration! All the best, at least your drawing looks good, mine looks like a doodle by a 2 year old all the time, all i can do is the edit photos using photoshop.
cheers,
jiashore _________________ [img:510:165:05e273eb5e]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/jiashoresig2.jpg[/img:05e273eb5e]
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I am jiashore, a newbie and enthusiastic photoshop manga editor, and a total luver of suzuka... *__* :p : |
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1ce Retired Forumer

Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 11:56 am Post subject: |
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| Cute drawing, but the human character seemed to get smaller and smaller toward the bottom. Needs a bit of editing on his had as well. Good job though. |
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CGY Jigoku Sensei

Joined: Apr 30, 2005 Posts: 13130 Location: The depth of hell...
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Face, ok, body, ok, but combined together, head is way too big! |
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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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cute drawing but i wish you just made it a Chibi type. neck is too thick and needs xome details on the hands. I like the chick though-cutest thing _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy! |
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rango newbie!

Joined: Apr 16, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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LOL.. now dats a gud post from CGY, i actually found dat really funny .
i was really tired wen i did this, so i couldnt think properly and make the drawing look better. |
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gundamcat Conscript

Joined: Jul 09, 2005 Posts: 190 Location: Salem, Oregon
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 5:54 pm Post subject: |
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| thats a really cute drawing you made uh it's good not sure what else to say so I'm go to stop and post k ^-^ |
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