Bakuretsu Tenshi wallpaper

hiroko · Last edited by hiroko on Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:10 am; edited 1 time in total

this my [ under construction ] 1st wallpaper >0< just learned i think it was last dec or last nov that i learned how to use the adobe photoshop so itll be really helpful to get comments from other people on how they think of it^^

http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=endlessrain5mn.jpg

and its my first so im working on this thing for so long now XD

so please kindly help me with ur views o what i need to take out or what can i add to make it more interesting^^

and i forgot to add >_> im so lost with this wallpaper right now.. ideas just wont come to my head!! dunno what else to add in it Sad

thank you very much
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xenon10 · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 1:54 am Post subject:

i like what you did with the suit. it looks so realistic. so is the water and the background. although, you need to improve with the body proportionality. and it's great to see someone who doesn't draw the boobs big. usually, people with make the boobs bigger, especially with nipple so clear against the suit, and it's annoying to look at. good! i give an 8!

hiroko · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:56 am Post subject:

lol thanks for the suggestions^^ actually i didnt draw it.. i only extracted its background and took out some of its robotic parts behind her back
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Evil_Kaworu · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 4:35 pm Post subject:

Not bad.

I would have made the hats it longer and clear and of the black or red wings, with the eyes he crosses task to you that would be more interesting.

Excuse my English.......

hiroko · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 4:38 pm Post subject:

wings.. yes wings!! white ones with bloodstains in it!! connected through the wound in her back!! arigatou!!!!
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NoyPi · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 4:49 pm Post subject:

Awesome

! That looks amazing! She looks like a combination of the girl from Evangelion and Matrix 9 cause of the socket thingy on her body) You only started using PS last month? this pic looks like it was done by a pro. How did you do it? Do you have any refference materials like books? If you do can you tell me what cause i also just started recently but wasn't able to practice much cause iam addicted in the manga section Laughing

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hiroko · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:01 pm Post subject:

1ce · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 8:22 pm Post subject:

Hey thats actually really good. I like it. Have you ever seen Gantz? I thought it was a variated suit from the Gantz suit on your picture. Its well done, keep up the good work.

Evil_Kaworu · Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 6:44 am Post subject:

It would be more difficult but that of tasks of mettergli six or seven wings? Type decayed archangel.

hiroko · Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 5:36 pm Post subject:

a type of dcayed archangel?? a way that she'll look more evil?? lol

i was kinda thinking of putting white angel wings with bloood stains all over it and some blood stains through the wounds on her back and some blood dripping on the water from her wings..

though i gotta wait since i need to draw the wings myself lol and think about how i wanna make it look like
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Evil_Kaworu · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:49 am Post subject:

When it is complete please sends a message to me Cool

NoyPi · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 1:51 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the site info. As for the background, i suggest a Mecha's head or cockpit were she came out from. This will look really cool. Want me to draw one for you:lol:
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ShinRay · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 5:18 pm Post subject:

I will give you props on it cause it is very clean, and well thought out... just umm why is the water a straight line across the body for some reason that straight line draws my eye straight to it... -------- Shocked

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hiroko · Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 12:42 am Post subject:

lol sure evil kaworu Very Happy

and a mecha head or a cockpit? sure my fellow noypi if its not too troublesome for you Embarassed

and evil shinray, does the water look kinda weird? lol. i thought it was weird though. so straight like that even though drops of rain for in it that should have given it more ripples or waves..

i got the rippled water instruction from this site:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/6353561/

and i think it'll take time for me to finish it Crying or Very sad

since i feel like im gonna busy for this week and on next week is gonna be our semester's final exam -.- *sigh* dunno if i can live not reading manga!! Crying or Very sad

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NoyPi · Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:47 am Post subject:

Ok! Here i Go. I'll be making the head today and send it to you after i finish it. i'll do my best and hope you like it. One problem though, don't know how to send it Laughing

. Can anybody tell me how Sorry! Embarassed

Haven't done this before. Very Happy

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