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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, I noted some. They are different from each other, as you've redone it, you changed a lot things too I see. So.....

1st Picture:

Her right hand is hidden, suggesting the weapon is embedded on her arm. Also, the dark lines portray a certain atmosphere, with shadows and details closely balanced. A short sword is sheathed on her waist, and her Katar is tipped with blood.

2nd Picture:

The drawing is drawn in a lighter ink now. Her weapons are also changed, and the right arm is shown in the pic as well (quite a good hand, if I may say so myself). But her face has plumper cheeks, and although her eyes are trained in the same direction, it has lost it's fierce gaze. Her nose seems bgger as well.

And I think the most distinguished feature are her legs. They became... ummm.. fatter~ Confused
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah...an in-depth look. Awesome.

meganeko wrote:
1st Picture:

Her right hand is hidden, suggesting the weapon is embedded on her arm. Also, the dark lines portray a certain atmosphere, with shadows and details closely balanced. A short sword is sheathed on her waist, and her Katar is tipped with blood.


Hahah, that's the most observant comment I've ever heard on my art. It's great that you were able to notice these details.

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2nd Picture:

The drawing is drawn in a lighter ink now. Her weapons are also changed, and the right arm is shown in the pic as well (quite a good hand, if I may say so myself). But her face has plumper cheeks, and although her eyes are trained in the same direction, it has lost it's fierce gaze. Her nose seems bgger as well.


Good hand? Thanks; most people seemed to think that it was off.

Yeah, the fat cheeks were a mistake that by the time I had noticed them, it was too late to make a change. The eyes were also a big problem to draw over; I couldn't seem to get them right no matter how many times I re-did the picture.

Her nose, if you look closely, is actually about the same size, but due to the face size and position, it gives off the effect that it's huge.

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And I think the most distinguished feature are her legs. They became... ummm.. fatter~


Heh, I was trying to make the drawing more realistic, since girls really don't have the pencil-leg thighs they depict in most animes.

Thanks a lot for the analysis. This is an old picture, though, and I think I can do better (a little) now. Until next time.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Where is the first one?

Good picture, the weapon is cool.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first picture is the darker one which is right above the second one.

And thanks.
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