A preview of my manga

basala · Conscript Joined: Jul 29, 2004 Posts: 134

I can see you have spend a lot of effort on this work.
As a result this is a high quality work. I certainly enjoy all the detail
in the picture as well as the colouring.

One thing I don't like about it is that there is too much going on in just a page.

Usually there are 4~6 sects to one page of manga.
What you put there is enough things to fit into 3 pages.
But nice work none the less. Please keep posting the rest.

slim_swimmer · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 10, 2005 Posts: 78

i think it would be better if u used photoshop to colour the page, other than that it looks interesting.

DrivaSix · Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 7:50 pm Post subject:

looks good but mayb the coloring makes it messy