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Hiddencamela Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:00 am Post subject: Jester's Bed -waitress the second one. |
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Based on the sketch of the outfit of the barmaid I posted before.
Tried a different shading technique this time around.
*her* right arm is abit off in proportion, especially the hand (i think).
But I have a habit of reworking parts too much leaving a mess, I left it as is for judgement. _________________ Everybody has something a skill they're good at.
Mine just happens to involve nothing. |
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DrJackal Jikan Samurai

Joined: Mar 14, 2004 Posts: 979
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:15 am Post subject: |
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| Her right arm and left hand are off in proportion, her boobs looks ok to me and her stomach/abdomen looks kinda thin. Quite good though. |
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basala Conscript

Joined: Jul 29, 2004 Posts: 134
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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Not bad except for the expression on her face.
I think it would be better to give her a smirk feel on the mouuth and more provoking glance on the eyes.
I like this piece though, the idea is sexy and funny  |
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Hiddencamela Heimin (Commoner)

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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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I was abit focused more on the phrase conveying the humour but now that you mention it, the smirk would add to the effect more. _________________ Everybody has something a skill they're good at.
Mine just happens to involve nothing. |
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