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Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Sketch of Chi, I should have made it a frontal though....

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DrJackal · Jikan Samurai Joined: Mar 14, 2004 Posts: 979

Kawaii and i presume that your looking at her back at an angle to the left because her left arm seems bigger than her right arm. It would of been nice at the front so she can show off her body but it's still good ^^.

Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Yeah, the right arm I redid a few times and jsut gave up after 4 or 5 tries (proportions are still something I struggle with)
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hoangcong · newbie! Joined: Oct 19, 2004 Posts: 31 Location: Australia

nice job

you should put more volume on the clothes and hair though
you should try to color it on psp or photoshop cuz i think it would look very nice
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Maglad · Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:50 pm Post subject:

Hey eyes look too alse, we recognize them as eyes by their placement on the head, mostly instinct. Add some lights to them, and the rigth one seems odd, double edged? I like the form of the face and the hair, tough
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NoyPi · Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:36 pm Post subject:

nice drawing but, i think it's better if you use a white as a background to highlight the character.
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blue_bee_pie · newbie! Joined: Oct 27, 2005 Posts: 11

kawaii....i really like the sketch^_^ and i agree the arms looks a little weird but excellent job!!! keep up the good work! ^_^

meganekko · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 7:56 am Post subject:

Woow. I love the simplicity of it~ Even though it's not so intricate on the details, the shading probably done the job.

It's great! Very Happy

But she doesn't look like the original Chii/Eruda of Chobits though.... don't worry, it's not a bad thing. Maybe you drew it in a chibi/youthful way.

Everyone draws differently~ (^_^)
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1ce · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 4:47 pm Post subject:

Hey, everything in this picture seems ok except the face and head. The head seems to need a bit of editing and the face is kind of off. The rest of the picture is pretty good. Keep on trying and you'll get it Smile

archie · newbie! Joined: Nov 05, 2005 Posts: 14

Everyone is so criticial but I think it's a nice job. It's just a sketch after all. Is the paper actually blue though? IT looks to me like it's a scanner issue.

Chi looks cute; the art just doesn't resemble clamp which or may not have been what you were going for.

meganekko · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 9:13 pm Post subject:

jiashore · Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:19 am Post subject:

KAWAII!

i love the cute large eyes, just that the mouth and nose size seems abit out of proportion. on the whole, its a really nice picture. but another point to add, the joint on her right arm seems like a leg instead, in terms of size and well.. shape! If you were to add a sparkle in her eyes, a bright light coming from the top left side, shining on half of her face, with the addition of color, this would be a very nice pic. Or even better, add a small shadow / reflection of the boy in which she lives with in the eye, WOW, i can't wait!

cheers and work hard,

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