punkrock samurai *no boobs*

davidstillwell · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 23, 2005 Posts: 53

nice drawing i wish i coudl draw

pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

CGY · Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:04 am Post subject:

Looks ok, but I think the legs are a bit too short, so the guy looks like a dwarf...

DrJackal · Jikan Samurai Joined: Mar 14, 2004 Posts: 979

I think the legs is too short and the way he's holding the sword on his right hand is akward.

pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

but hes supposed to be short ;_; and ye steh hand is weird

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 2:31 pm Post subject:

The art's okay, but the body is way out of proportion. Short people don't have such huge torsos.

I like the sword. Anyway, I don't see you make this mistake often, so I guess you don't really need any sort of advice...keep at it.

Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

I really liked the background!
As for the character himself, he's a little, as said, out of proportion. The thing that disturbed me the most is his ridiculously huge right hand!

xosarangx · Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:56 pm Post subject:

coolios!

pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

i a;was draw blocky hands its my trademark! ;_; well except on girls >>;; but yes his body is a lil skewy hmm

Ghostevolution · Conscript Joined: Jun 16, 2005 Posts: 166

you shoulda gave him boobs.

haha just kidding. nice that you did the background. i hate doing that. but it's good to have an environment for the character. lol but maybe he shoulda held a poolstick and not a sword...guess that's why he's the only char there XD

btw, what did u use to draw this? it looks like you drew the character straight from the computer...you got the expressions and the pose down but as a crit, you should work on proportion and line quality.

k nice stuffs man! take care be cool
-ghost

pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

nireth · newbie! Joined: Oct 28, 2005 Posts: 12

hm, I don't know. it should be a bit more... off. bizarre... I don't know how to put it but at the moment it looks like a normal pic gone wrong. I still like it basically though.
and why's everyone here so lazy when it comes to coloring their pics? Wink

pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

well personally dont have much time runninga webcomic and doing site design fe rp[pl takes alot out of me XD so no colorz XD at least not tyat often

zeal · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Sep 10, 2005 Posts: 56

nice him holding the sword is yea... but i cant draw at all and i have been trying for 5 years ok so iv goten alittle better i just dont have the time for it all i think thats the reason i dont compleate alot of my stuff