1st original

NoyPi · Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 11:13 pm Post subject: 1st original

my first original presenting himself Laughing

. Hope y'all like it. Comments & suggestions appreciated.

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Ani_MaSTeR · Mr. Lolipedo-Fin Joined: Jun 04, 2005 Posts: 1830

looks reli good.
excellent posture and tone. love the way u did the eyes, freaky. the hair and shadowing is also great.
a little more work on the face is needed, but thats just me.
overall, a reli good drawing. keep up the work, it may take u places that we all want to be...
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Ghostevolution · Conscript Joined: Jun 16, 2005 Posts: 166

hey man glad that you posted your artwork. i like the pose! well done and it shows well with the angle of the shoulders. small hand though...but other than that it's cool

ps. the dagger is showing! what a goofball. lol just kidding

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hoangcong · newbie! Joined: Oct 19, 2004 Posts: 31 Location: Australia

mmm i think the picture lack shading and highlighting. I take for example the rose who looks flat it is somehow noticeable on the character as well as the shading looks more like a cloth color rather than shadow... err what else.. the eyes should be more symetric i think.
basically i think you should try to work out a bit the shading and highlights of the character..

anyway good job, show us more work Smile

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meganekko · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 8:32 am Post subject:

Yes yes! Show more!! I really envy guys like you who can draw bodies! All I can do are heads....

From what I see in the pic, it comes from a sketchbook.... so there must be more where those came from!! Very Happy

The forefinger looks like it was redone a lot of times... it got all dirty from all the erasures... maybe.. I'm not that good with the fingers too~ Embarassed

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NoyPi · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:11 am Post subject:

thanx. i also thought the hands are small but i posted it anyway. about the dagger, i'am just showing the character's real intention. Giving you a gesture of a servant's bow w/ rose while actually preparing for a kill Twisted Evil

NoyPi · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:20 am Post subject:

yeah, i did the hands a few times cause i don't know how to position it and everything. actually i'am not that good at hands yet, takes me a few try before getting it. btw i used myself as a model for this thing Very Happy

, i look and draw myself from the mirror while doing this, f******* hard hehe, i'am just gonna do that just that one time and try creating w/o loking at the mirror lol. so try that it might work out.

Taisho2589 · newbie! Joined: Nov 04, 2005 Posts: 11

it looks pretty good XD
but you might need to make it a bit more proportionate

the_waltz · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 3:16 am Post subject:

he looks vaguely familiar, but i can't quite put my finger on who your character looks like...

1ce · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 4:49 pm Post subject:

Pretty good for your first original. The face seems kind of awkward but the rest of it is fine. Well actually the hand seems a tad small too. Well done.