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They don't rhyme because lousy is pronounced [lou'zē] as only is pronounced [ōn'lē]
Now you've posted something out of a dictionary,
And you said they don't rhyme! Oh how on the contrary!
Just because they don't spell the same doesn't mean they're different,
Just like Sea and Me, like Only and Lousy!
1ce wrote:
meganekko wrote:
Okay, it's not about poems, so I won't make it like that,
But if you make something rhyme, isn't it a poem or what?
And your last two lines are the ones that are corny,
"MeganekKO, Let's GO!", now that's what I call lousy!!
Was there supposed to be any rhyming in that post at all?
Now I'm really starting to doubt your own vocabulary,
Doesn't that rhyme with what? Now's that's not a mystery!
I think once again you'll criticize my work,
Won't you look at yours? Some rhyming that's so full of quirk!
How dare you bring some vulgar words when your's is already one,
Such pathetic rhyme, make sure you won't get banned!
Okay, I'll take the challange how I like to dare,
But your rhyming is so poor, it could make a nun swear! _________________ EX-mod
Ho, ho, ho, your rhymes are not so good
I challange thee, people of the hood
To a battle of rhymes, and as prizes - food!
My poem's not so shabby, but it's kinda crude.
A good rhyme is one that clicks
If not, then there's what to fix
Adjectives or not, anything is fine
As long as you rhyme it up, line by line.
The poem itself needs to be long
It has to have impact, like a gong
To stretch from the US to Hong Kong
And mayhaps reach some chick who wears a thong.
Now that's a good rhyme,
The right rythm, syllables on time!
Glad you felt that quantity's important too,
We could be pals! Of one crew~
I'm sorry if I'd been rude,
As you've said, mine's crude,
But it was just because of my mood,
From now on, I'll be good!
Okay, to 3 stanzas I'll go back,
Put my rhyme before in a sack,
I hope it could go on this way,
It will really brighten up my day~ _________________ EX-mod
NoyPi's work is full of smiley,
Some are moving it makes me dizzy,
But I think it's alright, they look okay,
Their action's the same as what he say.
I just came here today to look, to see,
If 1ce has come back and reply to me,
But he hasn't for now, so I'll just wait,
If he'll read my poems and bite the bait.
So now I'll just lay low, lounge and rest,
Maybe read a dictionary to make my vocabulary the best,
But I don't think I'll do that, so boring you see,
Although my grammar's already the best it can be. _________________ EX-mod
I thank you, NoyPi, for your compliments do flatter
I just hope I won't screw up and make my fans scatter
meganekko, your rhymes are not half bad
Don't mind 1ce, you sure got some talent, lad.
What oh what should I watch now?
For any recommendation, I will surely bow..
Boredom is slowly driving me insane
I am afraid i'll be banished, announced a bane.
Eating breakfast, and brushing my teeth
The daily routine really becomes a myth
I cannot go on with no excitements like this
Some chick wearing a thong, come give me a kiss.
Joined: May 08, 2005 Posts: 176 Location: Bumi Karang Indah, Lebak Bulus, Jakarta, Indonesia
Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 7:16 am Post subject:
Hey, hey, guys wait for me!
No way I'm gonna get left out!
now I'll start my rhyming spree
and so it's time for me to shout
It's been a while since I came here
things have grown and changed so fast
there's a new mod who is everyone's fear
his name is megane and he knows no rest ^^
I do think that this is a wonderful site
and I wish it will forever stay that way
everyone here thinks the same right?
that why for A-Source we know say HOORAY!!! _________________
Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 11:11 am Post subject:
I just woke up to a new day
i hope today i'am gonna be gay
I just ate a century egg
unlike those beggars whose out to beg
thank God i'am still alive
to share you folks my newest jive.
later i'am gonna make a rhyme,
that would really sound very fine
so hear me out until next time,
i'll go to the world that is mine _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy!
My heart is broken, what more can i say
I never knew it would be this way
So our story has ended, the book has closed shut
Our love is now over and im left alone, but
U think to urself "This'l last forever"
But for me it's all gone and im now without her
Never give up on ur dreams, dont ever let go
Cause theres just no way for u to know
The end of ur story so dont ever stop
Until u know if shes the one or not
But for now to her i said goodbye
This really happend yesterday, wish it hadnt -sigh-
(after 3 years of dating u would think we were going some where... -sigh-)
Joined: Jun 22, 2005 Posts: 1569 Location: wating for azumanga daioh reload...
Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:11 pm Post subject:
this is getting really sad
its not like my rhymes arent bad
im suprised this threads still here
so everyone have agood cheer....
( holy crap thats bad rhyming) _________________ CAIN is MY whore. touch him and die.
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Aznoutlaw, Sorry for I feel your pain
But no worries, on the long run u'll gain
Bachelor life is not so dread
Cheer up! *hands over banana bread*
Relationships are fickle things, son
Though you know that, so lecturing I'm done
Feel no sorrow for being left alone
After all, she's the one who will no longer moan!
Have some pie, hell, have a feast
Feel no shame, dine like a beast
Bring an end to table manners, for there no longer is any need
When no girlfriend is around, who cares how do we males feed?
Joined: Jun 22, 2005 Posts: 1569 Location: wating for azumanga daioh reload...
Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:37 pm Post subject:
Sepherz is right
look towards the light
cheer up my friend
lifes not about to end
it will get better
i like the weather _________________ CAIN is MY whore. touch him and die.
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Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 10:04 pm Post subject:
meganekko wrote:
1ce wrote:
They don't rhyme because lousy is pronounced [lou'zē] as only is pronounced [ōn'lē]
Now you've posted something out of a dictionary,
And you said they don't rhyme! Oh how on the contrary!
Just because they don't spell the same doesn't mean they're different,
Just like Sea and Me, like Only and Lousy!
1ce wrote:
meganekko wrote:
Okay, it's not about poems, so I won't make it like that,
But if you make something rhyme, isn't it a poem or what?
And your last two lines are the ones that are corny,
"MeganekKO, Let's GO!", now that's what I call lousy!!
Was there supposed to be any rhyming in that post at all?
Now I'm really starting to doubt your own vocabulary,
Doesn't that rhyme with what? Now's that's not a mystery!
I think once again you'll criticize my work,
Won't you look at yours? Some rhyming that's so full of quirk!
How dare you bring some vulgar words when your's is already one,
Such pathetic rhyme, make sure you won't get banned!
Okay, I'll take the challange how I like to dare,
But your rhyming is so poor, it could make a nun swear!
OK OK cut.. This isn't a rhyme.
Set things straight meganekko, lousy and only do not rhyme. Neither do that and what. I don't even look in the dictionary to find the pronunciation. As a person who was taught english as a primary language, i'd know. You could ask anyone in this forum and i'm sure any english speaker could identify that LOUSY and ONLY do NOT rhyme. Nor do WHAT and THAT.
If you truly pronounce these words similarly, then you are a victim of an extreme fob accent or stupidity.
OK OK cut.. This isn't a rhyme.
Set things straight meganekko, lousy and only do not rhyme. Neither do that and what. I don't even look in the dictionary to find the pronunciation. As a person who was taught english as a primary language, i'd know. You could ask anyone in this forum and i'm sure any english speaker could identify that LOUSY and ONLY do NOT rhyme. Nor do WHAT and THAT.
If you truly pronounce these words similarly, then you are a victim of an extreme fob accent or stupidity.
not to be mean meganekko but 1ce is right LOUSY and ONLY do NOT rhyme same with WHAT and THAT...
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