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Joined: Nov 08, 2005 Posts: 103 Location: Australia
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:40 pm Post subject:
basala wrote:
Lets just say that there are more good things about this drawing than the bad things.
The line work is decent, clothings is fine and the eyes really stand out. I also like the hair and the expression.
Things I think you can work on are the cheek( the left and the right don't mirror each other), The neck( seem out of place and is too long) and the head (could make it look more round rather than flat)
These are just my opinion though, you may think otherwise.
Thanks for the critisicm, I don't mind it caus im still learning and i need the help.
I agree with you about the neck being too long, yeah... I'll keep that in mind next time.
Also, I do find trouble with evening out the cheeks, I kinda spent an eternity trying to get it right, but i gave up half way through and just left it as it is.
And yeah, the head is a bit flat... never saw that until you told me, Thanx newaiz!!!
I really needed the help.
slim_swimmer wrote:
WOW AMAZING *paralyzed in shock wonding y im artisticly disabled*
lol, yeah umm... well its good to know that i can do summfin like that '>_>
Lets just say that there are more good things about this drawing than the bad things.
The line work is decent, clothings is fine and the eyes really stand out. I also like the hair and the expression.
Things I think you can work on are the cheek( the left and the right don't mirror each other), The neck( seem out of place and is too long) and the head (could make it look more round rather than flat)
These are just my opinion though, you may think otherwise.
maybe Satsuki is onme of those giraffe people from africa in this picture ^_^
but yeah, It's a really nice pic. I like most of it, aside from the long neck, which could easily be fixed.
Joined: Nov 10, 2005 Posts: 754 Location: under same roof and same room with Nishino (=^,^=)
Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:37 pm Post subject:
Cutie cooly Satsuki-chan, nice drawing urj. Maybe you can fix a little on the face shape. The eyes is good but need more practice to 100% like real Satsuki but that is better now. Ike Ike hope can see more of your work.
p/s: you're 14 hottouni? But if you're 14 that good to hear because you already can draw nice pictures and go on the age doesn't matter what we need is hardwork and some talents would gave advantages on drawing.
Joined: Nov 08, 2005 Posts: 103 Location: Australia
Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 3:33 am Post subject:
noodlesoup wrote:
I SERIOUSLY CAN DRAW BETTER, but practice makes perfect so keep on practicing dude
Yeah I've been practicing non-stop for 3 weeks know!!! YAY! and I've finished my newest picture just recently.
My latest picture took longer than expected O.o It's probably cause I had to redo it 4 times... >_>
I guess it's because I didn't want to disappoint you guys, problem now is that i dun have a scanner.
But I'll be going to my friends house this weekend, and he's got a scanner, so i guess i'll be able to post the image soon!!
It is very sharp, and it looks really good. Especially the eyes and her uniform!
You might wanna try add a little shading here and there as it is not perfected yet, though. _________________ Some days, some nights, some live, some die in the way of the samurai. Some fight, some bleed, sun up to sun down - the sons of a battlecry.
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Joined: Nov 08, 2005 Posts: 103 Location: Australia
Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 8:23 am Post subject:
Sepherz wrote:
It is very sharp, and it looks really good. Especially the eyes and her uniform!
You might wanna try add a little shading here and there as it is not perfected yet, though.
Yer, i did the shading after i had my friend scan it, cant be stuffed rescanning it... too lazy.
But my other pic is better that this one, heaps better!! Man, recently i've been inspired by the heaps of manga i've recently been reading. Wah and thanks to all of yous who encouraged me!! I'm doing my best!!
Joined: Jun 18, 2005 Posts: 141 Location: Lost in the fabric of space and time.... in other words, the kitchen drapes.
Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 9:14 pm Post subject:
It's really good, although, I must admit, not as good as normal satsuki, but still, close.... That rlly is the problem with copying something... you'r work is alwasy based on something else.... That's why I personally only draw my own chars.... although I SUCK with clohes so I only draw the face..... But I don't have a scanner....
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