"Yardan"

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:09 am Post subject: "Yardan"

Some random concept I made during class (as usual). Here's the main character:

And a group shot of the characters I've made so far:

This isn't really all that great, either, but it's the newest thing I have, so. Here it is.

the_waltz · Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 1:35 am Post subject:

the main character resembles a lot like gaara...

Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

Something about the main character's eyes bothers me, however this looks cool. Keep it up Smile

jiashore · Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 8:32 pm Post subject:

the eyes look kinda large for the face, almost 2 / 3 of the face. but the drawings are good on the overall. some highlighting and shading would do it some good. colouring too.

cheers,

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Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 10:59 pm Post subject:

The eye was an intended stylistic effect; I realise how large they are.

Thanks for the comments, though.

Raiviin · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 17, 2005 Posts: 55

The weapon, expecially the chain, is very well done.

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:47 pm Post subject:

Wow, really? I thought that was the worst part.

Thanks!

Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

The weapon really is good, but the chain is a little too quadrangular in my opinion. Nothing a 10 seconds fixing cannot change, though.

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 11:01 pm Post subject:

Yeah. The chain was, like the eyes, stylistic, but it does look weird now that you mention it...I can make better chain links if I tried, though. Razz

And thanks.