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Ghostevolution Conscript

Joined: Jun 16, 2005 Posts: 166
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 4:07 pm Post subject: GF manga - a preview |
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hey wats up? this is what i had as an idea. here are a few progress pages for the manga i would like to make. i still have much to work on but i'd like to show you what i have. i hope you like it! take care and be safe
-ghost
GF Inside Cover
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whiteleaf Conscript

Joined: Jul 25, 2005 Posts: 193 Location: Florida, United States
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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Holy ---! Man, that is absolutely awsome! That takes some real skill to draw the same character over and over again and make them look the same! The figures look perfect, but I think your manga( even tho it is only "experimental") would look even better if there were backgrounds in some of the panels, altho I'm sure if you were to actually draw this manga for real you would have backgrounds added in.
Also, nice story!
If I were to rate this 1-10 for the drawings, 10 being the highest, I would definetly rate it as a 10! _________________ [img:400:224:9a48d672c1]http://comalies.free.fr/images/ergoproxy.jpg[/img:9a48d672c1]
Which is worse? The madness of following Tao, or the madness of an existence without awareness?
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Aznoutlaw Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 232
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 5:31 pm Post subject: |
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haha very very nice man. The drawings look very very clean and nice cant wait to see more. The only problem i would have to say are the empty frames try to put more into it. But still very good the characters are drawn very well _________________
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 6:51 pm Post subject: |
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i love it, the characters are really detailed, and the lines are defined, expected of ghostevolution san, great job. colouring would do it good.
cheers,
jiashore _________________ [img:510:165:05e273eb5e]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/jiashoresig2.jpg[/img:05e273eb5e]
THE FANTASTIC FOUR
I am jiashore, a newbie and enthusiastic photoshop manga editor, and a total luver of suzuka... *__* :p : |
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Takasan Naginata Ashigaru

Joined: Jul 23, 2005 Posts: 486 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 8:22 pm Post subject: |
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Well...what can we say except...wow! AS usual the works that you post are always so well done! Because this was just an experimental preview and not the real thing I won't say anything about the empty background. And I agree, you seem to be able to draw the same character over and over again and still have him look the same.
As for the suggestions, the last page I think the girls face is kind of too small and doesn't look like your usual works....or I think it's that maybe the eyes are too high up on the face...yeah I think that'ts it. btw the girl on the cover is hot! XD _________________ The hardest person to forgive is yourself~ |
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Sepherz A-Source Staff


Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 6:04 am Post subject: |
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Wow, what can I possibly say?
This looks professional in any possible way. The only thing that might be lacking is some backgrounds for most pictures, though that's probably your decision if to add or not. The male hero looks simply amazing. Nothing to add there, as good as it can get. The female heroine (probably, in any way) looks great as well, so yet again, kudos.
One of the better projects, if not the best, I've seen around here. Keep it coming! _________________ Some days, some nights, some live, some die in the way of the samurai. Some fight, some bleed, sun up to sun down - the sons of a battlecry.
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cylofe newbie!

Joined: Dec 09, 2005 Posts: 16
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 6:31 am Post subject: |
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Wow this looks quite nice. Would be really cool if the cover page has some colour too  |
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Everway Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Sep 23, 2005 Posts: 67 Location: Singapore =/
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 12:30 pm Post subject: |
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| HOLY COWS oh man u sure are talented |
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Ghostevolution Conscript

Joined: Jun 16, 2005 Posts: 166
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 12:31 pm Post subject: |
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hahaha yes! i agree with everyone that i didn't do any background work. i was actually not confident with drawing structures and things so i think i'll be practicing more of that. the girl character is still undergoing construction with her look and design. i'm looking for a model for her but no luck yet
thanks again! i'm very glad yall like it and so....
here's a sketch that i was working on...hope yall like it also
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Takasan Naginata Ashigaru

Joined: Jul 23, 2005 Posts: 486 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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It looks good I'll tell you that but, I'm not really liking it....I hate scary things...even though I don't get scared easily it just creeps me out when it does.....creepy....but cool!  _________________ The hardest person to forgive is yourself~ |
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Ani_MaSTeR Mr. Lolipedo-Fin


Joined: Jun 04, 2005 Posts: 1830
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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hjey, i really like the first one u did. looks sooo awesome.
i especially like the thicker black outlining. and the pose too.
at first glance, it looked like something outta ichigo 100%; the plain pages that they place between chapters. and the GF font really suits teh picture.
keep up the good work, it might take u places.  _________________ [img:567:138:151453bb6b]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/wahagifsda.gif[/img:151453bb6b]
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XeroAlpha Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Dec 17, 2005 Posts: 55
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:25 pm Post subject: |
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I envy you for your drawing skills  |
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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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looks good as always. I thought it's your entry for the A-S contest "make your own manga" but too many pages = disqualified . BTW your Hellboy rocks. _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy! |
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Aya_Nishino Ronin Samurai

Joined: Nov 10, 2005 Posts: 754 Location: under same roof and same room with Nishino (=^,^=)
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 9:10 pm Post subject: |
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That what we called a talent.. nice drawing, lovely. More wonderful works from Ghost-san as well. Gotta see fot the next one.. Ike Ike and Cheer _________________
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angelhalo22 Punished by admin (points deducted)

Joined: Nov 17, 2005 Posts: 75 Location: not telling
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 11:37 pm Post subject: |
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*claping* you have done fab job ... i myself have been practicing my manga art
note: you must have spent a lot of time on those drawings so you should be proud so congrates |
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