DeviantART Gallary of D.A

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 12:47 am Post subject: DeviantART Gallary of D.A

Ok this how it is, Im posting my gallary up so i can get comments from (hopefully) the masters of the net. Wink

in my part of town im known as being really good. but i know how it really is. i have a long way to go in the art of editing images. but im am happy that i came a long way by myself. but in order to improve i need to kick into high gear. get up to the top with the big guys and girls i see on the net. so take a look at my stuff and comment on what i can add or do/try to improve at.

http://enixspirit.deviantart.com/

i now the poeple of the net will give good feed back that can help me out. i can take in the good and the bad. Confused

i just hope that the bad don't out number the good. I have a pretty good idea of what i need to improve in, i just want to know how?...

samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

Hi,

ur character art needs work, especially the faces which appear distored i.e the eyes are too far apart etc also you need to add more shading you to bring the characters into the 3rd dimension , Also you make heavy use of black which is never advised as it tends to suck the life out of a coloured piece and draws to much attention, comming along v nicely though.

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 12:24 am Post subject:

hmmm...intresting...TX for you help. i'll see what i can do.

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 12:36 am Post subject:

i just putup a new pic using a new tec, tell me what ya think of it.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10166638/

shoangore · Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 12:47 am Post subject:

your style's very good; your art has lots of promise in it. Cute chars : )

but yeah, you might want to put the eyes closer a little, and the one you just posted, I sorta think the fingers look a little demented.

otherwise, keep up the great work! looking forward to seeing more of your stuff
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Kaiser · Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 12:59 am Post subject:

I like your colouring, very bright and cheerful looking.

That latest work you posted. The face looks good, you seem to tend to draw wider faces which is more of a style than a flaw in my opinion and it looks cute in this case.

The thing I would improve on is her shoulders and fingers. Her shoulders seem to be scrunched up to the front a bit too much. Her fingers could have a bit more detail as well.

Looks good overall, nice work.
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Kaiser · Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 12:59 am Post subject:

I like your colouring, very bright and cheerful looking.

That latest work you posted. The face looks good, you seem to tend to draw wider faces which is more of a style than a flaw in my opinion and it looks cute in this case.

The thing I would improve on is her shoulders and fingers. Her shoulders seem to be scrunched up to the front a bit too much. Her fingers could have a bit more detail as well.

Looks good overall, nice work.
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Trisoft7000 · Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 7:07 pm Post subject:

thanks for your coments. iv been trying hard to improve my drawing and photoshop skills. your comments really help me out. also thanks for taking your time to look at and comment on my pics. hope you will continue to help me out. Wink

in my quest to get better...

Well keep a look out for my next picture. still working on it now but wouldve been done already if school wasn't slowing me down. but i guess almost everyone on here has the same problem.

samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

hi i would definately say that the last pic looks like u hav given the poor girl a dislocated shoulder, and it could have done with more detail and a greater attempt at shading and colour variation, u r def talented keep it up!

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:09 pm Post subject:

....to save the world.....i will........

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 8:55 pm Post subject:

ok...ive been working on my shading and tecs in photoshop and this is the lastest pic i did. i want to know what you talented people of Anime soucre thinks of it.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10494514/

and aslo i like to thank the poeple who have given me comments so far. you are turly helping me out. tx

samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

the shading is better and the eyes are a bit better too but still could b closer, the ankle of her left leg is too exaggerated and the position of her foot is painful, nice detailed back ground but it appears out of sync with the character. feel free 2 check out my deviant art, iam new 2 the community could do with my 1st comment. Wink

http://samonmoose.deviantart.com/

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2004 11:19 am Post subject:

ic, i started this picture as part of a school project for my photoshop class. i had did the bg first and then added in my girl in. it was a hard task to get her to somewhat blind in with the bg well. this was my second picture at attenpting to do so. another problem in doing this pic was "time". school really dosen't like me to have any. so i was happy with the way it came out in the amount of time i had to work on it and then turn in. but anywho, i see what your saying and will continue to practice more on it. tx for taking the time out to give me your comment. Cool

HyDrA · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jun 14, 2004 Posts: 215

Wahhh! so many neet pictures...* Shocked

staring

* so amazed..thats some nice work u guys got there...wish i could draw like that Very Happy

Trisoft7000 · Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 9:14 pm Post subject:

tx man...that means alot ta me. continue to keep looking back for new work..