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Koke newbie!

Joined: Sep 27, 2004 Posts: 15
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Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 3:11 pm Post subject: Experimental piece |
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Just experimenting a bit more with AI...
A piece I don't expect to finish...
Comments/Suggestions welcome |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 7:55 pm Post subject: |
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i like the neck and use of lines, but the eyes look wierd...
and the hair at the ears cut right through, change that part.. too
cheers,
jiashore _________________ [img:510:165:05e273eb5e]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/jiashoresig2.jpg[/img:05e273eb5e]
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I am jiashore, a newbie and enthusiastic photoshop manga editor, and a total luver of suzuka... *__* :p : |
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Aya_Nishino Ronin Samurai

Joined: Nov 10, 2005 Posts: 754 Location: under same roof and same room with Nishino (=^,^=)
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 1:57 am Post subject: |
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This is a nice drawing however still need a lot improvement.. doen't mean to be offense but I think you can fix on the hair * where her hair at ears points... invisible?!!* the way she look maybe she try to seductive. LoL that imo.. But I LOVE her lips and her face and neck,... I guess I got weird favors..
Overall is a good drawing.. lets us see your next drawing yaa.. Ike Ike N' Cheer _________________
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amagaeru Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jun 13, 2005 Posts: 51 Location: japan
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 4:18 am Post subject: |
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| make the eyes a little wider and it should be good. |
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Bowser The Very Lonely Wolf

Joined: Mar 26, 2005 Posts: 8282 Location: stuck in tard tard land
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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I like it even thought I'm not into that kind of style. ^.^
Thought...the hair doesnt look natural, its a little to flat on the front right side. |
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xinhua Punished by admin (points deducted)

Joined: Dec 24, 2005 Posts: 56 Location: Home SWEET Home
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 5:21 pm Post subject: |
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| I like it...IT a very intereasting piece......It would have look better if everything not so skinny...but I guess the whole piece of art would look different if u toke my suggestion. XD |
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