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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 12:40 am Post subject: An Unrelenting Heart
This is something I wrote a while back, it's an Unsent love letter of sorts but I've been thinking of making it into a lil animeish story (Would make drawings and stuff but i can't draw worth a crud...)
Also the story fits my signature hehe. Its from an past love if u dont guess lol the storyline wont be for kids or anything if i do make it into something other than this letter lol please read, and plleeeaaase leave comments hehe ^^
Unrelenting Heart
I still love you. It’s strange, I know, but it’s true. To me, saying this relieves some of the pain. Days go by and we always smile when we see each other, as if we were merely friends. You know we are not, you try to block me from your life. It’s ok though, even if I become excluded from your life, you’ll never leave mine. I’ll hold our memories we shared together till the day I die. It’s hard at times, but when I think back to our days together I always feel better. Remember those days? You loved me then, so why not now? My heart continuously aches, yearning to be with you forever and ever, and knowing that I can not, I feel empty. Never will I be able to love another as much as I love you. That night we kissed, do you remember it as well as I? We sat in your room, talking, then you kissed me. It was sudden and I froze, afraid to move, to break the moment. It was then that I realized my deep passion for you; from then on, seeing your eyes always brought me joy. The eternally blue sky contained in each round pool of white entrapped me within them. Your face was always smooth, soft, like a breeze in spring. Your breath, so warm and gentle, reminded me of summer. Now though, Your eyes seem cold when they stare at me, an eternal wasteland of winter. Upon seeing your skin now, the skin I shall never lay my hands upon again, wretches at my heart, killing it like fall withers away leaves. So why, if you hurt me so, does my heart yearn for you, ache for you? I shall never know that answer, the mysteries of my heart are vast, it is something I will never understand. But I accept the fact that I will forever be a ghost to you, an everyday stranger you see on the street. By accepting that, it eases the pain only slightly and allows me to continue my life a little bit easier. So here I am now, alone still, thinking of you like I always have and will. In my mind, we are living together, forever happy and in love, and if that’s the best I can get, then so be it.
With undying love,
The ghost from your past.
I might just make a story with nothing to do with this letter And have Aisheteru Yo as the title and the other stuff in my siggy as the um,... watevers... hehe _________________ An Unrelenting heart...
A never ending dream...
A ghost from a forgotten past...
Joined: Sep 01, 2005 Posts: 298 Location: Tokyo, Japan
Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 11:28 am Post subject:
wow..u really, show how much u love the person. good writing..
how come its unsent??, aww.. >< _________________ [img:450:200:a60d293270]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/yuren.jpg[/img:a60d293270]
*Shrugs* With slight modifications, that's almost like me...
Ah well, makes no difference now, does it, even if she's right in front of me now, I would not know what to say... Probably should move on... as soon as I work out how...
In a way its my own letter that I will never send ^^ I wrote it on saturday morning at 2 am (I do my best when tired and in the dark) While i was thinking about the person I love but can never have hehe We did kiss once too.... We've known eachother since childhood and we are still just friends lol _________________ An Unrelenting heart...
A never ending dream...
A ghost from a forgotten past...
Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:09 pm Post subject:
Good letter... Good letter... It was well written, but kind of a sad story how you and your childhood friend are "just friends". I think it'd make a great anime story, and a flawless artist should be what you're looking for. I think the best quality of art suites a good story like that.
Joined: Oct 25, 2005 Posts: 933 Location: Cebu, Philippines
Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:30 pm Post subject:
hey, have you seen "Runaway Bride"? i havent...well, that's not the point. my teacher told us her favorite line in that movie. when the guy said(not the exact words): "i can't promise you that we won't fight. i can't promise you all the luxuries in the world. i can't promise you that you'll be happy forever. but let me tell you this: i would regret this for the rest of my life if i don't ask you to marry me."
aaawww. anyway, he took that shot. he doesn't know how good or how bad the outcome is of their marriage but he too the risk. bad things come and go, and so does good stuff.
how bout you? will you take the risk?
if you can't, you "might" regret it later.
take note of the quotation marks...i'm not sure if you'll regret it either.
Joined: Nov 28, 2005 Posts: 67 Location: Where the wind blows... within the realm of men and through the world of the intangible
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 2:09 pm Post subject:
T - T what a sad letter. That would make for a heart wrenching story. As 1ce said, get a good artist and a good writer and you're set to go (well some voice actors as well). I like it. I've never experienced something exactly to that, but something similiar.
Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:26 pm Post subject:
VuDynasty wrote:
T - T what a sad letter. That would make for a heart wrenching story. As 1ce said, get a good artist and a good writer and you're set to go (well some voice actors as well). I like it. I've never experienced something exactly to that, but something similiar.
Maybe he should start out putting it into manga first instead of straight out anime. The story is already done (based on letter) and he just needs a good artist and editor. Later on, it can proceed into being a short anime series maybe.
Joined: Aug 06, 2003 Posts: 3938 Location: I'm in deep sheet of cute girls
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 8:40 pm Post subject:
Loveless, I know that you do not like poems, but you do not need to post such a big picture just to get your point and end it up with just a sentence.
If you do not like poems, then do not even bother to post anything. You receive my first verbal warning. Please do not do it again. _________________ Innocent Tranquility
The Smile that defies all thoughts of rationality[/
Joined: Aug 16, 2004 Posts: 1122 Location: Pointing at Polaris
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 10:18 pm Post subject:
Jsy3k wrote:
Loveless, I know that you do not like poems, but you do not need to post such a big picture just to get your point and end it up with just a sentence.
If you do not like poems, then do not even bother to post anything. You receive my first verbal warning. Please do not do it again.
Next time try using the PM function if such an event does occur and I do make people feel bad, I don't think the picture is so big that it would circumvent the forum viewing but it stretches it a little bit I'll fix that later.
Good or Bad it doesn't matter because 90 the shit that goes here is retarded. That is my personal opinion on that piece because what do you expect from a name called Loveless? Love?
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1)Spelt 'Had' and 'Would' wrong and if it begins with an 'If'; no good comes from 'If'. Name one that I can't rip apart and expose it for the spam + post count generator that it truly is.
2)I'll let this one go because everyone is curious about this.
3)Motto? Who the hell has a motto for everyday use? I know who, retards that read the I think I can, I think I can, I think I can garbage that if chanting the same word over and over will have an effect on life that doesn't result in a cockslap. Think hearing the same song over and over again at work for 8-10 hours straight. My opinion if I was in your shoes would be oh well Loveless is being a random douche again I think I should just let him now that making younglin' cry about lost love is bad. Despite that lost love songs are the main theme of latin music and some country music. Repetition is horrible and I will stop it from happening.
Even I can tell if anyone doesn't love you enough to love you back, give it up and find another person. I broke up with someone you don't see me writing a poem about how bad I felt or how bad she felt. Actually I'll give it a shot and see how good I feel after writing it.
That passionate kiss
Moving apart we broke up
I am very very sad
Oh well, I wrote something hella long so skip that shit and read the summary.
Too many heartbreak poems, repetition is bad, I hate christmas songs, heartbreak is rampant in central and southern America, love =/= loveless, I am now a poet and points will be deducted from my subtotal.
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