=3 yet another sketch...

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

im not sure what the background should be... o_x C&C?

*i understand details/shadowing arent shown in the picture... becuz i do that when i CG pictures* =3
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jiashore · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 10:25 am Post subject:

hmm...

autumn for background???

its nice... like the feeling...

cheers,

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Serix · newbie! Joined: Dec 28, 2005 Posts: 23

Not bad, not bad at all. Better than I can draw, without a doubt. I also like the falling leaves you added in. It looks nicer with something else in the picture other than just the person you're drawing, makes it feel like you put more effort and time into it. Gives it a better all around feeling.
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

thanks ^^ i'll do an autumn background then x3
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Aya_Nishino · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:42 pm Post subject:

artisticjunke29 you've done nicely, I like the way she look and their actions. Maybe more details work can help you to make this picture more better.

Her body got wrong a bit, her hair need to fix a bit too and that boy* if I'm not wrong* put more details on his hair should be more nice.

and I can't tell is she wearing a shoes or what?

anyway your drawing is really nice and I hope can see more for you and Autumn is nice for the background Cool

Ike Ike N' Cheer and Happy New Year.
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NoyPi · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:33 pm Post subject:

nice sketch, as for the BG everyone is telling an autumn theme would be nice, but if you want another idea snow or rain is good too cause it seems that the girl is protecting herself by putting her hand in her head and running while the boy is enjoying it by throwing some snow or letting himself get soak in the rain.
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doujo · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:50 pm Post subject:

this is a pretty good sketch! And I agree with everyone for the Automn theme. It would perfectly fit! Hope to see it finalized soon ^^

meganekko · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 3:44 am Post subject:

Hehe, at first I thought they were celebrating for the holidays, and the falling things were confetti.... but I think it'd be good for autumn too~ *imagines some autumn-themed anime* (-_-)~*

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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

xD! u always find the best pictures to go along with it all xPP

i kinda had that in my mind as well.... o.O and btw...thats a girl. both of em r girls. i was in a cowboy bepop mood =)

noypi - ooo thats quite an interesting idea actually o.O! but i wanted warm colors instead of rain ^^; but thanks =)
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Bowser · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:38 pm Post subject:

OOooh....I like this pic!

I love the body poses! You should probly do a copy, ink it and tone it...then it would look realy cool.... Cool

hhhmm......I like the hair style of the school girl, but her haid seems a little small......but yeah, I love this piece! good work!!

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

thanks ^^ i will ink it soon =3
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1ce · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:27 pm Post subject:

Nice picture, but could've used some more detail such as shadowing. Overall, its pretty good. Keep up the good work. I like the eyes.

xenon10 · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 4:22 am Post subject:

one problem: body proportionality...that's all, so that means you're good. good for autumn..'cept there's no autumn here. hahaha. so an 8 i guess. and you also know how to calculate the size needed to emphasize that the 2nd person is behind the 1st one. well done.

pyrorecca · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 4:35 am Post subject:

The 2nd person is behind the first?

I thought that guy got cretinism and so had very adult characteristics on a child-sized body.

My eyes must be wrong.

Aherm........Yeah good work there. Like to see it in colour