Come see my draw i need some comment!!!

kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

Hi everyone,
i need critique to get better!
[img]http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/913/chose29mw.jpg
that's is one of my first manga... he's an elf
[/img]http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/677/sanjih5nn.jpg
this is sanji from one piece... i love this guy!!
Im gonna some more later!
thx for comment[/img]

Aya_Nishino · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 1:26 am Post subject:

Kuro, I think you forget to close tag after you put the links.. I can't see the pictures, any mods can help her out.

EDIT

I don't know which picture you'd want to upload but I'll upload the latest one of your drawing and color picture.

skecthes

Colors

please comments for her, kuro-chan a.k.a Helen..
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my comments: well this look more nice than before, you'd improve Helen. I think you can do more better at hair part for the next time. I like the way she look and you'd awesome coloring there. Hopefully can see more from you and wishing luck for you...

Ike Ike N' Cheer and Happy New Year.
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kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

the draw is more nice because it's more like a real person... Im good to draw real person..but animed like manga... i have a lot of difficulti's...
whatever... thx for the comment!...like you sayd my hair is not really good..so i have to work it!

doujo · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:40 pm Post subject:

The two first ones you post look really good! Specially Sanji, I think he's very nicely done! As for the first one, the elf, I have the feeling that his head is too big for the body. For the rest, it's really good though. Maybe the neck is too small? Or is he built like this? The last one is very good too, I personnally can't do such drawings... I've tried once to reproduce (in live!) my little cousin in Vietnam, it wasn't bad, it was the first time I could draw something that good, but if I don't have a model, forget it Sad

So I think this pic look very good! The hair look good too, but as Aya_Nishino said, it needs some improvement. Otherwise it's very pretty ^^
Anyway, the way you draw is very good, you have talent and I can see it. All you have to do is to develop them at its fullest! Show us your other drawings soon so we can see your improvment!

onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

The sanji one is very nice. The girl pic is the best one I think.
I STILL can't do looking down face poses yet > >. So hard to master.

This thread is kind of confusing if you don't read the posts lol.
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Aya_Nishino · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:09 am Post subject:

Direct link for Kuro-chan drawings..

character of Kuro-chan manga, an ELf

Sanji from One Piece

my comments:

I kinda like both pictures above, but more details on his hair will be nice, try to make hair look lively. I think his eyes quite good but is still need to improve and try other types of eyes b'coz I can't is he good person or a bad guy? His clothes also got something wrong, try to careful next time...

for the sanji drawing, love his look. This quite good but try watch out for the lining, not to rough will be nice... his eyebrows also is a bits diff from the real picture.

However I believe you can do more better for next time..

Ike Ike N' Cheer and Happy New Year.
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NoyPi · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 1:13 am Post subject:

The elf was drawn nicely but looks kinda boring cause maybe of the dirty scan, plain shirt and no highlight, but Sanji is awesome, you made him really look cool, but where is his trademark eyebrows? I like how you colored the girl, looks great.
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kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

no more comments?

Aya_Nishino · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:25 am Post subject:

I'm so sorry Helen, at that day my connection was down till today I can't acces and I'd forgot about to upload your pictures.. pardon me.

[img:233:320:65b0476504]http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3260/aile6yf.jpg[/img:65b0476504]

please comments about her drawing.. ok

Ike Ike N' Cheer.
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Takasan · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 2:43 pm Post subject:

I like the first girl and this girl here above me*nosebleeds* did you make these up?
Because i don't remeber them from anything...the last girl looks nice, the first girl looks kind of "realistic". Like how you did her hair, looks very nice.
The girl above me looks kind of creepy hot though. her eyes look like she needs some sleep. good pose though, lovin it.
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kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

i have begin to color the last one.. i hink its great.. i have just made the skin color but i think she is gorgeous like that...dont you think???
[img][URL=http:111:167:36fb899f3a]http://img307.imageshack.us/img307/9805/aileombrepetit2xe.th.jpg[/img:36fb899f3a][/URL][/img]

kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

i dont know why its so little...sorry for that

urj · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:59 pm Post subject:

Heres the URL:
http://img307.imageshack.us/img307/9805/aileombrepetit2xe.jpg

I like your drawing, it's really good. And also you have some skills at colouring in, unfortunately I don't... but yeah, keep up the great work Very Happy

Yuusei · newbie! Joined: Jan 15, 2006 Posts: 24

lovely art.

^^ keep up the great work. :3

kurotsubasa · newbie! Joined: Dec 27, 2005 Posts: 22

thanks

the comments.. i think that the last one is the best that i done... i ve made another one but to do something on first..so im gonna put it tomorrow maybe.. Smile