aj29s art dump x3

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

just to start this off.... =D
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1ce · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 5:05 pm Post subject:

Nicely done, but the neck proportioning and the head positioning is off. Proportioning for the head also requires adjustments, but otherwise its good. Interesting how it was done in mostly similar tints and cool colours.

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

thanks. i noticed that the eye is too far to the right but with the placement of the head/neck, i thought that was fine (i had actually fixed it from a previous try)

and heres a new one.. just playing around with screentones =D:

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xenon10 · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 10:33 pm Post subject:

i give the first one a 7. the heasd and neck placement is right, but the head is way small for your neck. and the emphasizing of the breast was a bit off. but the color, i just love it. purple is the new black. Cool

the 2nd one.....i give it a 10! awesome. first time using tones? pretty good. hey, are those tones expensive? how do you use that anyway? is it available in bookstores?

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

if u are a more traditional artist you can buy tones that u can stick onto the manga page u are working on. but now if u use the computer (adobe photoshop, etc.) to do ur art u can download them as patterns and use as a layer style >> pattern overlay =)

and thanks.
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xenon10 · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 10:55 pm Post subject:

i see* thinks*....so which one did you use? this is your first time doing it, right? really good. 2 thumbs up

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

uhm..im not sure... photoshop gives a certain amount of tones u can use. the others u'll have to download on certain sites though i cant seem to find any of the ones i used ^^;;; sry >.<
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meganekko · Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 5:47 am Post subject:

Wow, I'm not quite a fan of Pattern Overlay myself. I can't seem to get the hang of it. Whenever I use it, it totally dominates the picture. And when I decrease it's opacity, it's barely noticable.

Ughh~ Wish I had talents like yours... T_T

Glad you finally made a thread for your works. Hope to see more~! Wink

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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

x3 thanks. just practice i guess. observing other works helped me alot ^^

hope to have more soon =D
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small_sushi · newbie! Joined: Dec 19, 2005 Posts: 29

ooooo...i sense a shoujo style! I agree with the part about observing other works. Any more you gonna post??

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

x3 i luv shoujo. lolz yep shoujo and more will come... =)
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NoyPi · Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 7:06 pm Post subject:

the girls' head is a bit out of position and the breast also looks a bit too flat ( poor girl ) Laughing

. i can't help but comment on the broken lines that circles her, what's that supposed to be? i don't know why but i can't help but smile everytime i look at it. The guy looks cool and confident. I really like how you drew him and also great job at the screentones.
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

thanks

>.< lolz i was told the breasts were too big on the first sketch so i made them smaller... so now.. maybe they're too small x_x lolz

as for the things around her i have no clue. i was in the mood to draw something swirl around the character...so i did that >.> it kinda reminds me off like those cartoon bees leaving its trail of where it flew xP
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meganekko · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 5:44 pm Post subject:

Hee hee, yep it's a bit small, for the anime world of course. But in real life, that's normal~ Laughing

Anyway, I just noticed how you colored the first, you used a small brush didn't you? Cause there are a lot of places that are colored uneven Sad

Use a bigger brush, and the select tool. You have any new pics?? I wanna see.. Wink

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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

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okay nothing big. just random picture and i wanted to try out sum new brushes =)

its not even inked. i might use her as a character not sure. =)

and... editing those an all from photoshop... i made this:

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the 2 guys are the same person and just having sum issues of split personality =) yeayea. the shading for the hair is different. leave me along -.-" drawn at different times so.. ^^;;
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