Check out the second page X_X

Takasan · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:08 am Post subject: Check out the second page X_X

Got back online and wanted to show my new sketch/concept. Feels like coming back home when I'm here Embarassed

'tadaima'
[img:700:641:20d8d65a6e]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/web.jpg[/img:20d8d65a6e]
Any comments or suggestions are welcomed.
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jiashore · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:31 am Post subject:

woot... if only i was that lucky to have a gal like that whn i return home... it'll be so great! Very Happy

anyway, its kinda hard to see on screen the details, so you might wanna play with the contrast and line the drawing again... but maybe its only my problem...

cheers,

jiashore
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1ce · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:35 pm Post subject:

Overall a well done picture, but the thing I don't get is where the girls other leg is. Still pretty good though.

greenlogic · newbie! Joined: Dec 13, 2005 Posts: 47

good drawing but it still looks unnatural... the girl and the guy the way they are position.

Unlimited_Will · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 09, 2006 Posts: 52

Sorry. This post is a little late. But i agree with greenlogic.

NoyPi · Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 10:51 am Post subject:

i like the drawing all-in-all but, i have just one problem with it. The hips is a bit too twisted and looks like uncomfortable place for the girl. try making it face the otherway(front) or just flat on the floor.
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gallen0 · Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:36 pm Post subject:

Very interesting

Takasan · Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:06 pm Post subject:

Yea girl always seemed weird to me too but I didn't worry about it too much. I don't exactly know how to fix this one either so can you tell me what to do with it?

On that note here's a new model:
[img:400:672:454d9eb440]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/death_adder-web.jpg[/img:454d9eb440]
[img:500:798:454d9eb440]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/menkai.jpg[/img:454d9eb440]
=p Some parts got chopped off on the first one when it was scanned but I'll redraw it in...The one on the bottom is actually an old pic from the 9th grade, just found it in my old binder Very Happy

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mkawa6 · newbie! Joined: Jan 12, 2006 Posts: 11

good stuff, i do agree that they come out kinda of light, but the new models came out a bit darker. i like your drawings though.

gallen0 · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 4:59 am Post subject:

Your two models are very nice. To be more precise it could interesting to make put more strenght to your outlines. With this method you'll give more precision to the shape of your drawing.

If you want to be sure of your drawing, you can make a flip horrizontal (in Photoshop) and see what is correct and what is not.

You can develop your designs in Photoshop with some grey for the volume, and some inking on the outline.

If you want to give an "Inking aspect" you can do it by chosing the Level Method (Ctrl+L). A great Tool for cleaning a drawing.
I have another method, but it will come later, this one is good enough.

Good draw!

emericaonline · newbie! Joined: Jan 14, 2006 Posts: 11

Nice mechs. I've always had a fascination with Gundam or any other kind of mech show.

NoyPi · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 5:47 pm Post subject:

wow! i really like your new mech design, very cool. The old one reminds me of Gundam Epyon from Gundam Zero series. Try inking your drawings so we can see it better. You're very good at drawing mech's, you give me an inspiration to make one. Thanks
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Takasan · Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:43 am Post subject:

Thanks guys. I think I'll color one of them. Show us your mechs you guys. I feel kind of lonely being the only one with mechs.
Mech-Armored Ceybrums.
M.D. = Mobile Drones
A.M.U.= Armored Mobile Unit
That is what these mechs shall me known as. I need a story to go with this....
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cutelilgaara · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 08, 2006 Posts: 88

oooh how romantic. Cool

all i have to say , is her leg doesn't seem to be *connected* to the rest of her body, and it's a bit too bent, or the angle seems a bit off

ShinRay · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 5:22 pm Post subject:

On the coming home pic i love it reminds me of my baby... damn i cant wait to go see her again... I miss her :'( ... the armors look really clean and even tho its chopped, on the first one... would it be alrite if I got on my knees and begged for training... my skills for drawing/sketching went straight down the drain after getting into highschool and gaming... never drew for like 8 years...
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