Sasuke

NoyPi · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 10:50 am Post subject: Sasuke

part of the Naruto group drawing i'am gonna do. watcha think?
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27587128/
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LoneFalcon · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 6:15 pm Post subject:

well it looks pretty cool, should add some colour

Eradia · Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 1:35 am Post subject:

WOW I think it looks alot like him
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NoyPi · Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 10:02 am Post subject:

thanks guys! Maybe i'll color it someday cause i'am still learning PS.
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Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

Looks really good! Sasuke's expression is really good as well, he looks quite serious, and somewhat sad, just like he is in Naruto itself.

I like the composition as well as the anatomy. The only thing that might need some fixing is his right leg. The folding of his pants somewhat seem unrealistic. A background can also help !

Good work overall.
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critias · newbie! Joined: Jan 13, 2006 Posts: 12

Good job!!

small_sushi · newbie! Joined: Dec 19, 2005 Posts: 29

I agree with Sepherz. The folding could use some work. When drawing/inking folding/clothes, it'll be better using quicker strokes of the pen/pencil. Doesn't matter if it doesn't go in the direction you want it to, but that makes foldings look more natural.

other than that, very nice clean line art. Can't wait to see your coloured version!

NoyPi · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 9:26 am Post subject:

Glad you all liked it. I took a look at it again ang i think that Sepherz is right, i might have put to much folds in it and it does look a bit unnatural. Thanks for the insight. i will just fix it before coloring sometime soon.
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Takasan · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 2:37 pm Post subject:

wow! [NoyPi] looks great but yea i agree with what [Sepherz] san said. Looks good you should add a background to it when you do it in PS.
Oh and there is a cool Saving feature in photoshop that is used for the web. It's the "Save for Web" feature. Makes files a lot smaller so it's faster to load.
Need help with Photoshop, use the tutorials here on A-Source! =D
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greenlogic · newbie! Joined: Dec 13, 2005 Posts: 47

Wow that is really good! If you color it, it would look more interesting and a ton better. I love the way you drew it. The pose is natural looking and everything seems in the right proportion. The face looks cool. That pretty good hands you can draw there. Hope to see more of your works!

Soud · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 14, 2005 Posts: 51

nice drawing, very natural

PetitePrincessYucie · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:53 am Post subject:

I love your drawing. It looks so detailed! ^_^ You should draw other characters!
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NoyPi · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 1:09 pm Post subject:

Snow-Smile · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 10, 2006 Posts: 52

It looks great but I really want to see some color in it.

ShinRay · Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 5:15 pm Post subject:

Umm did u trace it by any chance because I actually have quite a few pics of him in that position in the mangas and art books... just a question, and if you didnt trace you are good and deserve your credit. so good job Wink

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