ILYNTI - Akito x Naru

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

my OC charas Akito Kunisaki and Naru Oikawa
from my online manga I Love You Nante Totemo Ienai
( yeah i make long title >>; )

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... maybe this should be the new image for my webpage? *ponders*
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jiashore · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 7:08 pm Post subject:

your pics have continued to amaze me... their amazing..

however, improvements can be made... for the girl, you kinda should be making the eyes more distinct than the hair, the current one, the hair stand out more than the eyes. other than that... its perfect...

any full body pics???

cheers,

jiashore
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Takasan · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 9:01 pm Post subject:

Very nice. Man you guys just keep passing me by. I'm getting left in the dust...actually I'm so far behind that I can't even see the dust. I need to start drawing again. Once the exams period is over and the new laid back term begins it's drawing season baby!

The coloring and shading of the skin I think is done flawlessly. The different color of the outline sure does give it a more proffesional feel to it.
However the shading and folds on the clothing I think needs some more work.
No..actually it's just the collar of the shirts that need to be changed. The rest of the clothes look fine it's just the collars that seem to have shades/folds that don't belong there.
The other thing is what [jiashore]-san said, the outline of the eyes on Naru don't match up with the blue eyes. I think a light black(is that a color?) or the same color outline as Akito's would make it look a little nicer. all in all good job, a good peice of art. Good job and keep posting more. I love your works. post your manga sometime y'know.
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naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

ty for the critiques
i like to put random shades in random places
*laughs*

here was how it originally was

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27674192/
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baldandhairy · newbie! Joined: May 13, 2005 Posts: 11

*pokes* You're in manga revolution artncha? Very Happy

Anyways great picture, simple yet effective colouring, very soft and nice. Looks really professional.

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

yep !
i'm in manga revolution !
i'm almost everywhere you can post art O_o;;;
ty for comment ^^

myotaku, deviantart, sheezyart, random forums, gaia.. lol !
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

great job on this! luv ur style ^_^
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NoyPi · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 4:41 pm Post subject:

Lookin Great Shocked

I like how you color, sa smooth and dreamy. Nice style on the hair also, those straight line highlights looks good. My only problem in the pic. is the boy, he was faded to much that it looks like he is a ghost Laughing

BOO

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naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

lol !
akito~kun as ghost XD;;
*writes a story*

yeah... he does seem a bit light ^^
thanks for comment
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1ce · Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 8:20 pm Post subject:

Sweet CG... I love it. It looks pretty much professional but the eyes have some awkwardness in size or something.

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

it's my style ^^
very shoujo, ne?
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greenlogic · newbie! Joined: Dec 13, 2005 Posts: 47

Is this online manga realease yet? i would love to read it. They two looks very cute together. Dam the girl is drawn very cute and the guy looks cool. can you tell me what the idea of the online manga is about? and one last thing nice coloring! hope to see more of your work!

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

Tanin · newbie! Joined: Jun 27, 2005 Posts: 13

<3's art XD I wish I could do stuff like you Naru-chan-san....AH! it's amazing! heh heh you've got a fan!!! *glomps and stalks on DA*

si1ver_dr4g0n · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 03, 2005 Posts: 52

Great picture! The eyes are very distinctive, standing out from the rest of the picture, and the hair is done really nicely, it's textured and fits the face well.
Overall, great work!