Tifa Lockheart <3

Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Tifa Lockheart sketch.
Changed the wristband thingy since i drew this in the middle of class (eyes roll...)
From what I could tell from my own critique, is the arms are stiff/misproportioned (forearms too long someone told me), Eyes seem abit odd but can't pinpoint it. And the breasts are abit off somewhere Very Happy

But otherwise..... This is me practicing shading Very Happy

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Oh yah....those're my marks on the otherside if anyone notices Razz

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greenlogic · newbie! Joined: Dec 13, 2005 Posts: 47

Nice drawing and shading1 The arms although seem a bit unnatural and the face just doesn't look like Tifa. I think it is the eyes and the facial chape that makes it look like someone else other than Tifa. But the body and the shading is very nicely done. Wish to see more of your works!

jiashore · Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 6:42 am Post subject:

since you were concentrating on shading, i shall comment on your shading instead of drawing as it would be a useless comment right? you shading skill a great... but it would look nicer if you could add a bit of a light source from the side / sides...
about the drawing... arms are stiff looking, face kinda wierd shape, but hey, no concentration means no good work am i write... but i can see the skills there... next time, do it at home... not in school.. the works will look much better.

cheers,

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Smart_Alex · newbie! Joined: Jan 01, 2006 Posts: 19

Good drawing but I'll talk about your shading, its a little dark so maybe maybe have more light sources, other than that shes good and I am playing FF 7 again this is my 16 time I love that game
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NoyPi · Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:32 am Post subject:

It looks nice. As you said, the arms is a bit stiff, other than that i don't find anything else wrong, everything looks good and yeah the shading is too dark. A little modification and this would look better.
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