Jealous Women - Manga I'm working on

azndude · Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 5:47 pm Post subject:

keep it up and you will have a story

kaastang · newbie! Joined: Dec 07, 2004 Posts: 20

WOW! i wanna see what happens next lol why'd ya only post up 2 pages

Ruffle_Master · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Feb 03, 2006 Posts: 52

are you sure it's not from proffessional? Razz

angelhalo22 · Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:35 pm Post subject:

really good it is as if it were published

rengetsu · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 22, 2006 Posts: 50

waa nice job =D love your manga <3

lovetsukasachan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 29, 2005 Posts: 51

erm.. to be frank i think ur sketches are abit stiff.. i mean.. the characters pop up too sudden.. u could improve that by progressing on each character's movement slowly with each panel.. but the drawing's great..its juz that every movement's very sudden.. thats all...

aznfattass · Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 10:39 am Post subject:

yea, im with tsukasa, tehy jus pop up to sudden, maybe u should over it again, make it more so the reader wants to get into it more, like they cant wait to read the next panal, thats wat most manga authors do, u should try it, but coming out great, are u going to update it soon? or do u alrdy put it up? cause i really want to read it XD

artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

thanks everyone. ive made up my mind to redo the thing a long time ago, but i was hit with a massive case of artist block. (note my long absence xD)

but i think im recovering, so here's my late entry for vday. (it prolly dusent belong in here but i didnt feel like starting a new topic. xD

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so now that the feb vacation is in a day. i think its safe to say... im baaaccckkkkk!
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Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

Thats really awsome!
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Takasan · Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:38 pm Post subject:

Oh, geez! these are great! Love this last one. Her face is so hot! Love everything about her, except the hands looks like they aren't in the right postions/locations....no maybe its because her arms are too big?

Love it. She is so beatuiful. her clothes, hair, skin. face, etc.,etc., My only complaint is yea, the arm(forearm) looks a little too thick.
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ddrrll · newbie! Joined: Sep 22, 2005 Posts: 18

I'd say the reason that it doesn't loook manga like would be the toning, though I have no idea why xD The background should look more vibrant even if it is b&w.

CGY · Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:29 pm Post subject:

You are really one interesting artist...

Must get your help...

IAMJAMIN · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jul 21, 2005 Posts: 86

xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

It's very good but... hrm... the hands are a bit... off. Hands are tricky. Also the bodies are stiff, and the one panel where the kid accidentally hits the girl? Shouldn't there be an impact mark? Because it only looks like the kid is passing by. The backgrounds are kind of plain.

And lastly, the last panel the girl's face looks a bit flat. aside from that, it's very good.

jkonle · newbie! Joined: Jul 17, 2005 Posts: 42

O.O TOTALLY HOT DRAWINGS!!! *eats* xD Maybe if I eat them, I can draw like you x)
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