drawings

hiroko · Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 10:44 pm Post subject: drawings

hi im kinda new here so hi everybody^^

just wanna know on how u view my drawings since.. i feel that they're not that good compare to the others that i have seen >_>

so.. thanks ^_^

They are characters from the anime Card Captor Sakura

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jiashore · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 5:02 am Post subject:

facial anatomy can be improved, but the overall feeling is there... keep it up... at least u draw better than me...

cheers,

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Aya_Nishino · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:31 am Post subject:

I'm so busy started this year, that why I can't post much..

Like her smile and her hair but I'd want to see overall picture.. can do some more at next time..

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Takasan · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 2:47 pm Post subject:

looks nice considernig the fact tthat they were done in pen. Drawing in pen is hard. Good job, keep it up and post more of your works. I feel like you're hiding some from us y'know.
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emericaonline · newbie! Joined: Jan 14, 2006 Posts: 11

Pretty good the worst thing i see is the chin is a little wierd but only slightly, pretty good i must say.

hiroko · Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:06 pm Post subject:

thank you all^^ im still kinda improving on drawing the body parts so ill try and post as soon as i can more drawings of mine^^

oh.. and indeed it was drawn in pen.. the pen was making puddles everytime i focus it on place for so long so theres kinda little puddles on ruby moon's chin^^
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TeH · Conscript Joined: May 16, 2005 Posts: 199

haha, sketchin on the notbook paper, nice. I would say that maybe you should try to clean up your lines a bit, it's okay to use shorter lines that look messy when you're doing initial sketches, but try to always finish it off with clean sweeping lines in the end.
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spankit · A-Source Staff Joined: Jan 29, 2006 Posts: 4562

at bit scratchy and rough around the edges
but im sure once u fix it up it'll be awesome
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azndude · Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 1:28 pm Post subject:

hmm... i like how u made the eyes it looks very descriptive and also the first one's head was tiny and the hair was huge which is kinda weird but keep it up anyway
also add color

aznfattass · Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 5:17 pm Post subject:

hey not bad, but u have room for improvment, anyway, on to my point, the firsts pics hair, ill say its ok, but the head looks funny, u see on the right side? it looks like someone punched her and the cheeks went in, and the second pic, the mouth looks a lil bit too high, thats where the nose is suppose to be, so if u lower it a little, it will be ok

not bad drawn in pen, i do the same thing in school, its jus so boring. any way, its jus some suggestions, but u dont need to pay any attention to me, keep on working hard XD