My girl i drew...my best ^^

Ahala · Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 10:27 pm Post subject: My girl i drew...my best ^^

and by looking at it, you can see i suck...any way here it is ^^

[img:679:1343:bb81cfc081]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9691/girl1zx.jpg[/img:bb81cfc081]

oh, btw the things on her head are ears..., i am hopeing that she will be the cover girl for my manga ^^

Edit: i know the mouth is to big =\, that just goes to show that i suck xD
Edit: by ears i mean cat girl Wink

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azndude · Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 7:17 pm Post subject:

well there can be improvements in most parts, lets start off with the eyes i think are pretty huge and just make them a tad bit smaller also bigger boobs, cooler shirt, better hair, and color
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Takasan · Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 12:47 am Post subject:

Needs some improvements. but that's ok everyone starts some where. and to go along with [azndude]'s advice here's a quick draw I made in MS paint for a a little example I guess...iono. sorry about that, i was just bored and haven't came here in a while....i miss you guys Crying or Very sad

[img:313:495:b407a80a77]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/ahala-example.PNG[/img:b407a80a77] well [ahala] that's my attempt at your character.(I was assuming he/she was a girl, so if not, I'm really sorry^^ Wink

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Ahala · Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 1:56 pm Post subject:

tanks every one hehe >> and yes she is a girl...i suck at proportions and what not so.... i am trying to get better tho, thanks on telling me what needs improvement hehe Smile

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aznfattass · Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:45 pm Post subject:

like takasan said, everyone starts some where, if u are really going to start your own manga, may i suggest buying a "how to draw manga/anime" book, dont take it the wrong way, even i started with these books, and let me tell you, my pics were like ****, you get the idea, so yea thats bout it all i have to say, keep on drawing XD

Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

Jon its preaty good! Laughing

lhfan_19 · newbie! Joined: Nov 04, 2005 Posts: 20 Location: Poland

Im not cruel enough to go in a tank on you... Second one was a lot better. Someone try to say that it is not.
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Ahala · Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 5:11 pm Post subject:

aznfattass · Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 10:51 pm Post subject:

really????? i have 3 too XD, i find them really useful, i learned wuite alot from them, Ahala, ever thought of taking any classes? im taking some calsses now, im a art major in my hiogh skool so i have to take a calss there, and i take one at the afternoon, and some on the weekends, you should going there too, they are so good XD

lhfan, i think u are thinking that ahala drew the second pic, i hate to burst your bubble, but can u look at the posts a little closly? it was Takasan who made that quick drawing, so yea...........please read the posts a little bit closer next time

Ahala · Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 2:36 pm Post subject:

xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

Aww you guys have how to draw manga books? >>;; I need one... damn. I had one but never used it, dunno why. The style was too ehhh...

Anyway, yeah it does need some improvements but everyone starts out SOMEWHERE. Keep practicing (I didn't believe it at first, but it does work!)

spankit · A-Source Staff Joined: Jan 29, 2006 Posts: 4562

fix up eyes.
a key thing in anime that makes it anime is the eyes
u got the whole scarily large thing going but u need like
the reflectingness and everything u can just google up
"anime eyes" and u can just copy those.

and just look around and how anime character's hair is
its not as solid in coloring. but im sure once these improvments
are done, you'll be on ur way =]
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Ahala · Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 5:26 pm Post subject:

ddrrll · newbie! Joined: Sep 22, 2005 Posts: 18

Not to sound rude or anything but it would help if you followed the step by step explanations in those manga books you wrote, like the drawing the oval for the face and the guidelines for the places you put the eyes, nose and the mouth.

Red-Ninja · newbie! Joined: Jan 22, 2006 Posts: 12

yep you have to train a lot...specialy the basic figures...like the oval face.... Embarassed

You still draw better than me I'm just a beginner...