Anime girls that I drew

Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

here are some anime girls that I drew randomly this month
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please rateand make comets on this one!

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THis one I like but make a comet onit any way!

PLEASE post!!!!

meganekko · Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 6:11 pm Post subject:

Wah, that's cute! They have that childlike quality in them. Although they're quite roughly drawn and a bit messy, a bit of practice could improve it. Wink

Is that second one from Midori no Hibi or Green Days? She looks like her... Very Happy

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jiashore · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:26 am Post subject:

abit messy and rough... but cute nonetheless... luv the neko in pic 1 too... ^-^

cheers,

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Aya_Nishino · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:38 am Post subject:

That was quite good Acacia, I think with workhard and some reference could help you out... Ike Ike I will be here to see next of your artwork.

btw they pretty cute..lovely ^^)

Ike Ike N' Cheer.
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whiteleaf · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:17 pm Post subject:

Those are pretty good! Very Happy

they have a very gentle look to them.

The only critic comment that I have is that they are a bit messy, but I think it is because you had sketched out the figure before actually drawing it-maybe I'm wrong but that's what it looks like to me. Some careful erasing would fix that up tho.

Nice work!!
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spankit · A-Source Staff Joined: Jan 29, 2006 Posts: 4562

as mentioned they're a bit rough and seem
to hold a childlike quality ><

but nothing a little work cant fix.

keep working on it =]
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silverkitsune · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 5:32 pm Post subject:

Since no body is mentioning it, I'll say it.
There is a mistake in your way of drawing the eyes.
When you draw the glisten of the eyes, draw them from one side only. If the light is coming from left, draw the glisten in left side for both eyes.
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aznfattass · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:23 pm Post subject:

not bad, you still have room for improvement tho, like the eyes, just like whta silver said. but i think there is another problem with the eyes, dont they look like they are crossed eyed? its in both of your pics, you should look into how the eyes are in mangas, the next thing is, the pet that shes holding, i think its a good idea if u add like his feet hanging down, you know from the bottom of her arm, and third, is the second pics body, to me it looks kind of small for the body, so yea thats about it all i have to say.

i'll say to you what i say in all the other forums, if i offended you in any way, i'm sorry, and its just me, so don't need to pay any attention to me XD

Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

thanks for the advice and comets and i will look into the eyes I still need work but thanks!

Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

Great advice for the eyes thanks! I will try to make some improvements on them! I will be posting more of my art on here thanks again!

Ahala · Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 5:08 pm Post subject:

remember to use the edit... >.> hehe good job sis ^^ (yes she is my sister....a better drawer then i am) xD
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Acacia · newbie! Joined: Feb 14, 2006 Posts: 11

lol thx bro
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xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

It shows promise. Keep practicing, also the neck seems too short, you should let it flow out more to show some emphasis on the shoulders.

Other than that keep practicing. (It works, surprisingly)