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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 1:00 pm Post subject: Kakashi |
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Requested by PetitePrincessYucie. This is Kakashi's reading his new favorite book - Ninja Centerfold: by Naruto (who else) watcha think
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/26692095/ _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy!
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si1ver_dr4g0n Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Aug 03, 2005 Posts: 52
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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| I like it! It captures Kakashi's attitude and the details in his clothes are great. Awesome lineart! |
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Takasan Naginata Ashigaru

Joined: Jul 23, 2005 Posts: 486 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 8:31 pm Post subject: |
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Some how looking at your drawings tell me that you did it in your head. Seems like you drew it from the top of your head. If you did
Props. Very well done [NoyPi] the only thing I see wrong, well it's not wrong just that's it's not from the original work, is that you have too many small wrinkles in the clothing. Naruto and many other anime have bigger folds in the clothes.
You are not alone my friend. I have the exact same problem. if you look at my old picture that I posted here earlier I do the exact same thing with the wrinkle in the colthes. Actually I think I still do.
Very good and keep those peices coming. You are an amazing artist [NoyPi] _________________ The hardest person to forgive is yourself~ |
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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 10:02 pm Post subject: |
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Thanx. I just used a mirror to get a hold of how it should look and started from there. About the clothes sorry about that, it's just that i'am not used to it yet, maybe i'll try getting some tuorials about folds somewhere I'am only self taught so maybe i'll improve it through practice. Thanx again for the feedbacks, it gives me inspiration to draw. _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy! |
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baldandhairy newbie!

Joined: May 13, 2005 Posts: 11
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 3:39 am Post subject: . |
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| wow nice, the pose is very well done |
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PetitePrincessYucie newbie!

Joined: Jan 10, 2006 Posts: 15 Location: Downtown Eastside NYC
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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-applause- Thanks! ^_^ It's so awesome. Your really good keep up the sweet work! _________________ Perversion Is A Disease Caught By The Flirts Of Society.-Yumika's best quote. |
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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:49 am Post subject: |
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thanx y'all. I'am glad PPY n BBH liked it . _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy! |
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lovetsukasachan Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Apr 29, 2005 Posts: 51
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 10:59 am Post subject: |
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| lolz.. another nice pic from deviantart.. |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Dec 06, 2004 Posts: 257 Location: Portugal
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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nice pose ^^
the draw looks good, what's he reading |
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spankit A-Source Staff


Joined: Jan 29, 2006 Posts: 4562
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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wow its really nice!
but is it just me or does his eye
seem a tad weird? _________________ "The basis of optimism is sheer terror."
(,,#゚Д゚):∴;'・,;`:ゴルァ!! |
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deadman123 Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Sep 19, 2005 Posts: 81 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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| naw the eye is perfect XD kakashi is so damn cool like that |
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azndude Conscript

Joined: Jan 10, 2006 Posts: 178 Location: Doing your mom
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Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:57 pm Post subject: |
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the eye seems alright to me... also it would look cool if it was in color.
i think you should put some other characters in it which would make it cooler.  |
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aznfattass Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Feb 09, 2006 Posts: 58 Location: dont worry bout it
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:01 pm Post subject: |
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| nice work, really good, i'll have to comment on the colthing a lil bit, it looks nice, but i think it has a lil bit to much wrinkles, thats wat think, other then that, its good XD |
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NoyPi Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Mar 17, 2005 Posts: 260 Location: Dead St.
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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thanx everbody. Iam still getting used in doing folds/wrinkles so maybe next time will be simplier & better
BTW he's reading a new book which is titled Ninja Centerfold (authored by Naruto) cause Make-out Paradise is over-rated  _________________ Fly! FLy! Flyyyyyyyy! |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:31 am Post subject: |
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on the overall, the details are done well... coloring would do good... but one thing you might want to change is the eyelid... looks wierd.... so big...
cheers,
jiashore _________________ [img:510:165:05e273eb5e]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/jiashoresig2.jpg[/img:05e273eb5e]
THE FANTASTIC FOUR
I am jiashore, a newbie and enthusiastic photoshop manga editor, and a total luver of suzuka... *__* :p : |
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