Critique needed xD

xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

I kinda suck at coloring... uhh... scratch that I can't color for my life lol. But anyway, this is some Ragnarok Online Fanart i did. It's for valentine's day, just goes to show that my rogue hates lovey dovey-ness! Wahh! Poor cute monsters run away! XD

[IMG:427:338:336cb13eb2]http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a269/xkrazydog/greedisgoodcopy2.jpg[/img:336cb13eb2]

And this is a pic of my original character ^^ Pirate King smexiness.

[IMG:337:422:336cb13eb2]http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a269/xkrazydog/Aegis.jpg[/img:336cb13eb2]

Critique and constructive criticism needed xD.

whiteleaf · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:06 pm Post subject:

I think your pics are good! Wink

All of your people characters look pretty good proportion-wise. Very anime-ish!

I do have one thing to say about the colored pic tho: I think it would look better if you didn't put the bright red on top of the dark blue in the background. The colors kindof contrast each other. However, if you don't see anything wrong with it, then I think you shouldn't worry about it. You should develop your own style of drawing and draw and color the way you want.

Overall very nice!_!
Keep it up~
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spankit · A-Source Staff Joined: Jan 29, 2006 Posts: 4562

i like it.
i like the 2nd one more though...

but then again its just me.

its REALLY good though Embarassed

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xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

Thank you ^^ Thank you very much!

Aya_Nishino · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:09 pm Post subject:

I think it's alright and nice..Nothing wrong with it..keep on okay. ^^)

you're RO fan too sweet Smile

. hope can see monk or assasin cross after this...

Ike Ike N' Cheer.
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aznfattass · Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:26 pm Post subject:

EVERYONE LUVS RO XD XD XD

anyways, i like them, great job on the coloring (cept...the background......yea......) anywayz, how bout a sniper? XD DRAW THEM XD

j/k j/k anywayz, hope to see more of your work

Xristyan · Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:24 am Post subject:

i haven't played RO at all but looking at your pics id say you are pretty good.. well since i am a total loser at drawing anyone is better that me and i can say to them as a fact that they are pretty good.. ahhaha... anyways.. keep it up dude.. hope to see more..
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

hmm well. i think you have potential. if you kept at it, it would definitely turn out to be something good. you still need alotta practice, and lessons never hurt anyone. although alot of skillful people are selftaught.

as for the second picture, the head turned to the side is nice, the other one smiling is... not so good. i guess it just needs practice. xD
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xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

Ahh, ok. I like the smily one tho he looks cute, but ok xD. Also, I guess it would look better if My Photoshop had a pen tool > < but it doesn't. So its just a pencil drawing. but then again, I don't know much about Photoshop to begin with.

Well then, back to the drawing board.

ddrrll · newbie! Joined: Sep 22, 2005 Posts: 18

the first one.. well, I think there's something wrong with the arms of the rogue... before going behind him, shouldn't the elbows show?