a few pics

laseraces · newbie! Joined: Jan 08, 2006 Posts: 2

these are some pics i drew i while back, figured it couldnt hurt to post them and see what yall think Smile

(let me know if they are too big)

[img:464:640:6da9ba410c]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4412/minilila25il.png[/img:6da9ba410c]
[img:441:640:6da9ba410c]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6307/minimizuki18bj.png[/img:6da9ba410c]
[img:542:601:6da9ba410c]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3939/minimizuki22ab.png[/img:6da9ba410c]
(havnt finishd cleanin this one yet)
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Xristyan · Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 8:09 am Post subject:

this works are good.. i love the detail of the weapon on the first one... the eyes on the second one are good too... though i think there needs to be a little improvement on the third one.. the eyes seem to far apart...

a little more smoothening out of your style and you will be uber cool.. Very Happy

hope to see more...
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laseraces · newbie! Joined: Jan 08, 2006 Posts: 2

i agree with ya about the eyes, the two points i always have trouble with are the eyes and hands, although if i can get the eyes in nice everything else just tends to fall into place. hopefully i can get some time to work on more soon Smile

NoyPi · Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 12:13 pm Post subject:

Thew first two looks good, nice details on the gun Very Happy

but, the head are a bit out of proportion. The third one looks great and showed a lot of improvement. keepitup
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whiteleaf · Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:33 pm Post subject:

Wow, you have some real potential here! Those are good Wink

I really like the details on the gun in the 1st pic!

But a few things: on the first pic, the mouth seems to be a bit too far up on the face. The mouth to me is always in the middle between the nose and the chin. Perhaps this pic will help? I found it on About.com.
[img:100:139:710412ca46]http://z.about.com/d/drawsketch/1/0/Q/3/headproportion1.jpg[/img:710412ca46]

On the 2nd pic, the right eye seems to be too far over from the nose and other eye. For the 3rd one, the eyes are too far apart.

Don't think that this means that you are no good at drawing~ your pictures are very good Very Happy

After a lot of practice, your eye will get better and better at deciding proportions on the people you draw. It's all in practice and taking note of details in the human face. Nice job!! Keep it up Mr. Green

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gavi · newbie! Joined: Dec 09, 2005 Posts: 6

laseraces , very funnyyy Very Happy