Shinobi Themed woman

Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Didn't come out quite as detailed as I had hoped but its a step closer to what I want Very Happy

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[IMG:431:539:9b9aaac4b5]http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y33/Hiddencamela/Lorrainsm.jpg[/img:9b9aaac4b5]
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Xristyan · Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:27 pm Post subject:

nice work you got there..

you actually did quite good on the details for a gray scale drawing...

if this is not what your hoping for in quality then i am sure you will do better the next time you post.. and i will be expecting that..

hope to see more works soon...
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NoyPi · Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 12:19 pm Post subject:

Looks good though it would look better with a bit of cleaning anda good lineart Wink

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Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Oh for sure, I'm planning on doing it over in black pen, scanning it in and trying to work with it in photo shop, see how it come out after that Very Happy

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whiteleaf · Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject:

Your figure is very good Surprised

Wow!
Nice details on the clothes, hair and face! And I noticed that you kept pretty much all of your highlights and lighter shades facing the same direction, so that it seems as if there is a light source coming from the right.

Your figure is good, but your landscape could use some work. Drawing a landscape in the background would add more depth to the picture. I see some attempts at clouds in the top portion of the picture~if you want to learn how to draw clouds good, then I recommend sitting outside and sketching out clouds you see in the sky. I would say the same for any other landscape object.

Anyway, great job, an keep it up Very Happy

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xenon10 · Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:44 pm Post subject:

wow! thats really good. and your shading's done so well. ahhh, i'm jealous. not much to say bout the body cuz you've really done a nice job.

since you perfected the anatomy, move on to landscapes. and when you're done inking this one, better post it again. alryt? hehehehe
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Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Line art of the actual body...
I'm going to create the background from scratch using photoshop.
I'm using random photos from my collection to compile a landscape as well Very Happy

Photobucket shrunk the size, too lazy to tinker with it but heres the line art I'll be using as a base.
[IMG:422:638:c0c9525dcf]http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y33/Hiddencamela/LorrainLineartsm.jpg[/img:c0c9525dcf]
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onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

Great!

Just work on line thickness. You seem to have everything else going very well.

*scrolls down*
ZOMg, how did u do that line art thing? did u redraw it or something?
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

Hmmm you need to work on your lines. They aren't steady yet, and kinda like... well wonky.

Try to keep a steady hand, don't press too hard, and use an inking pen to do lineart.

Adding lineweight depends on what kind of art you want it to be. Usually, they SHOULD be lineweight, but if its like a comic page of such (or an actual anime picture) there might not be.
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Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Aye, I did redraw it. In fact, I traced it over.
I have a used light table from an uncles workshop.

Actually to be honest, I wasn't aware of the line weight problem (I've taken 1 art class in my life and it didn't focus much on these aspects).
I appreciate the wonky line comment actually, after rechecking the line art, it really looks like I had too many coffees while doing it. Also, I should have used a black felt tip pen (My cat was playing with the one I normally used...no clue where it is now).
Curious though..... in what art styles would Lineweight matter? (I really don't know). Like... comic art only or animations, aesthetics?

I do wanna know about this tho, Since I'm actually drawing out strips for a comic that a friend and I are working on. I draw the strip, line art it and send it to him for colouring.
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azndude · Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 6:36 pm Post subject:

ohmigod thats awesome sry cant say much but its great!!

Takasan · Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 1:10 am Post subject:

Iyosu! Taka-san is back! lol
wow I'm gone for a while and all these new works come out. I gotta make sure to make some time to come here
very nicely doen. Love the first finished pic. looks nice.
love the stance too

nice job

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yeeunit123 · newbie! Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 12

hmm
yeah very good
i like the shading