i drew something..great subject title yeah i know (nudity)

ladyarakune

i drew something, and, it was kinda drawn as a joke, but if i can get some feedback, just genereal feedback and criticism, it would help alot... becuase right now my "people" dont really look human... so yeah, any help is appreciated...

this one i drew for my friend who said she wanted to be surgeon when she grew up, i thought it was kinda funny, so i drew her as a nurse...

[img:252:425:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/nursescan1.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]

this one i drew becuase i got really bored in english class, and we were reading romeo and juliet, and on the cover they had some weird modern artsy-picture, and im like "wow, this is ...weird" so i tried to draw her like, how a normal juliet picture is, it turned out okay-ish.

[img:377:481:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/julietsy.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]

ps. im a scanner newbie, so my totally sicknasty scanner skillz, are really not all that sicknasty

next i drew two for my buddy, who tried to convince me her dad worked for the nypd, and i was form the west coast, so i had only seen the nypd in movies and was like "SWEET!". but she lied and i took revenge with my mechanical pencil... (you like that phrase? i like it too....)

[img:222:393:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/thenypd.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]

and the rest are just absolutely random masachism and crossdressing pictures i drew in short, 2 page comics for my buddies, so yeah!

[img:426:514:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/theangelofdeathniceandedited.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]

[img:284:427:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/justlousi.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]

[img:222:616:0ce985dca4]http://www.anime-source.com/upload/uploadFiles/jackmeetslawrence.JPG[/img:0ce985dca4]
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

Lined paper = BAD
Sketchbook = good

Anatomy problems all over, mostly that the head is way to big for the rest of the body. And the boobs are weirdly distorted in certain pictures.

Study real anatomy, human body, etc. What? Oh, you draw in an anime style? Yeah well. You still need to know real anatomy. xD

The way you draw a head.. they lack features like the chin, cheek bones, etc.

Once you practice anatomy, everything should level out, cuz right not everythings kinda messed up in proportions.
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ladyarakune · Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 3:59 pm Post subject:

lined paper, lolz, yeah, heh he i guess its not the best if i intend to show it to anyone other than myself.

and the thing about anatomy is that by trying to make my work look like anime, i guess i lost track of some of the proprtions along the way (like, i only draw one eye, and i make one boob bigger than the other... lolz)

thanks so much though, i really appreciate a comment better than "yeah great" which is what i usually get from my sister...
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

Thanks for taking this so nicely. =)

Will be waiting for some new works.
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ladyarakune · Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:34 pm Post subject:

no problem! i thought you were really nice, i just hope other people comment,....

COMMENT!
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Cephadeath · Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:30 am Post subject:

well, i must say, gj on the clothes.... thats where I always flater when it comes to drawing full sized figures..... but ya... wierd body anotomy..... foor one thing.... they all look like kind of square figures (stick figures + bulk).... too straight.... and waaaay too skinny... even barbie is fatter than that.... not even the most super-freaked-about-her-weight model would, or even COULD remove enough organs, bones, and have enough liposuction to get that skinny
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Also, the hands look off too, and so do the boobs, as you so kindly mentioned.....
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sonteen12 · Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 4:10 pm Post subject:

Nice costumes and all. But you might wanna plan before you actually draw. Like making an easy circle for head, outline arms and body to see if they go accordingly. It's really not that difficult, so try it! Smile

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