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ogeray
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 Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 10:18 pm Post subject: naruto sketches |
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again... naruto and kakashi
taken again with my camera
[IMG:480:640:2fd7832107]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/ogeray/----------/P6130212.jpg[/img:2fd7832107]
[IMG:480:640:2fd7832107]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/ogeray/----------/P6130213.jpg[/img:2fd7832107]
[IMG:640:480:2fd7832107]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/ogeray/----------/P6130214.jpg[/img:2fd7832107]
these were still in the drawing/shading process. i still did not outline and accented many parts. comments and critiques needed and welcomed!! |
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Xristyan
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naruto seems to be bulging in the abs and kakashi seems to be a bit malnourished..  but since this ain't the final work or so you say then there is good room for improvement which im sure you wil be able to fill...
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NoyPi
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| Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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I would agree with xristan about kakashi being a bit too thin and is he an immitation cause i think i've seen that before. Naruto looks great and the bulging thingy is natural cause he's wearing baggy clothes. Good Job
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xenon10
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actually, xristyan's right. the stomach part bulged too much, even if naruto is wearing baggy clothes. yes, kakashi's too thin, too. you were doing great with his face and neck but you got lost when you went for his arms. same's with naruto. good head, proportionate to the neck and shoulders, but the right was too big. so, improvement in that part. but your shading's really good. not much to comment bout that. keep it up.
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ogeray
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| Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 3:11 pm Post subject: |
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haha
thanks
alot of people said that kakashi is a bit too thin. maybe its the lighting. but i finished most touchups and will posting pics soon.
thanks for the critiques
helps alot |
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