rough sketch, girl in bikini

ViperXtreme · Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:00 am Post subject: rough sketch, girl in bikini

just a quick sketch, drawing female bodies is really hard Sad

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edit:
modded the pic a bit, this is th actual pic, sorry its taken using a digicam...
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TeH · Conscript Joined: May 16, 2005 Posts: 199

Nice work. I like how she looks normal since alot of manga these days has unrealistically proportioned women in it. The only places that could use some work are her hair, and the inside line of her right arm(the left one when you look at the pic)
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aznfattass · Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:26 pm Post subject:

finally, a pic thats not "overdone" (big boobs, butt, etc, u know wat i mean) its good, but i think the stomach doesnt needd to be so skinny (or is it just me) , nevertheless, its in the the good/verygood rankings, i like "thumbs up"

ps: yes, it is hard to draw females, i think its because i've been drawing only malle chars for so long, wish i can draw half as good as yours T.T
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ViperXtreme · Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 10:19 pm Post subject:

thanks, i never really liked overdrawn really anime girls with unrealistic proportions anyway.

Cephadeath · Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 12:30 am Post subject:

great job... i find there's something off about her stomach.... but it might just be me..... great job otherwise, except as otherwise noted.... the face has an odd look to it too.... but again, prolly just me....

way better than I could ever do......
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ViperXtreme · Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:49 am Post subject:

edited some stuff...

Xristyan · Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:41 pm Post subject:

nice work... as everyone else here mentioned the proportion on some parts are done with good taste... she has a relatively large rib cage in comparison with her stomach though.. Razz

i think that is the thing they are mentioning with the stomach.. Razz

still good anyways... hope to see more stuff.. Very Happy

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ViperXtreme · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 12:38 am Post subject:

i guess i overdid the waist pert since i tried to arch her back a bit for the cloth in her hands...*takes note*

xenon10 · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:07 pm Post subject:

first time you drew a female body? wow, it's good. you're very talented. hehehe. although, some parts need some improvement. her hair's good as well as the face. and man, those are nice breasts. neatly shaped and not so big(hallelujah!). but you arched her back too much, making her stomach so small. or maybe you made the stomach too flat that it didnt coincide with how you arched her back. tip:if you really want to arch her back that much, dont be afraid to add a bit of bulge on the stomach. it doesnt mean she's fat, but to emphasize that she's sticking out her chest. then, her arms need work, too. both her arms are too fat for her. just thin it a little, and add a bit of shape into it.

good luck.
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ViperXtreme · Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 2:03 am Post subject:

thanks for the tips.
it aint the first time i drew a female body, but it was the first time i drew that kind of pose so i had a bit of a hard time hehe.
its prolly better to observe some more female bodies to help myself improve.
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no you perv its not what you think Razz

129930 · newbie! Joined: Jan 19, 2006 Posts: 15

not bad, i might say.
i guess that her stomach is abit too small but since it's been noted, why bother saying.
I think that her hands are abit too straight ( right one. well... the left one from the picture )
her right leg ( left one from the the picture again ) might need a little bit of touching up. Her left leg seems smaller than it.

azndude · Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:39 pm Post subject:

well not better than i can do!!! ahahh so hot really good really really goooooooooooooooooooooddddyyyyyy
yea...

DaAznBaller · newbie! Joined: Feb 05, 2006 Posts: 22

nice picture... i think it'll look better in colors if u can somehow use photoshop or any types of programs to add colors to it

jiashore · Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:20 am Post subject:

I like your style... definitely naruto style rite? i see a small naruto in the back... >_<

okae.. uhm.. i think the female body is done very well.. much better than my first time.. mine was two fishballs falling off a vertical plate... (For boobz if u dint know... -__-" )

i also like the way you drew the face... if u want references for your style... i strongly recommend aira who was once here in the fanart forums since i last came 3 months ago...

cheers,

jiashore
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aischool2 · newbie! Joined: Dec 08, 2005 Posts: 35

WOW freaking cute! and the original is pretty funny!... i swear that guy was me in the back lol jk! any others?