<<Chemistry for humanity>> quick comments please

[jiashore]

Dear all,

hi guys, i have joined a poster competition, the theme being "chemistry for humanity" ... this is what i have done till now, just wanted to ask for the comments from the people here about my submission. I still have a week or so to complete it, so i am desperate for quick comments.

The black space i still haven't thought of what background to put in, thought u guys could give me a few ideas.

i am also afraid that what i have done does not follow the theme, so would like some comments here too... and suggestions to make the poster closer to the theme...

PS: All i have done till now is 100% photoshop cs2...

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thanks you guys!!! ^_^

cheers,

jiashore
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[thepoet]

Your idea does make sense, but I think that falls more under pharmacy. But it does make sense that you need chemistry for it. But the bodies flying toward the pill and earth is a little weird. In the background, you should put something that's a little brighter since the black, void space would contrast from your idea (that chemistry does good things for humanity, right?). Well, then again, since it's from an outer space view, the black space makes sense... but if you don't want that, I think clouds would be a good thing? Or even a bright yellow since the sun could be symbolic of goodness.

[jiashore]

thanks for the comment, the bodies flying towards the pill is more of showing the need fro the advancement of chemistry towards the future, and the reliance of human beings on chemistry. As for the black space, its more of i dunno what to put there, thats why i leave a blank space. Its like "fill in the blanks" for you guys here... >_<

thanks.. i'll try the clouds background too...

cheers,

jiashore
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[jiashore]

Hi all,

updated my submission, here it is again.. took the comment on putting the clouds, how is it now?

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cheers,

jiashore
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[thepoet]

Wow!! I think this is much of an improvement than before. And I understand the concept now. But now the contrast is a little too high (it's a little too bright). The humans seem a little too ghost-like it seems. But I do like this better!