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Vivya
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artisticjunke29
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GAIA PERSON!!!!! x333
well. the candy corn STILL looks like someone just stuck a sticker on his head. like if you go to a photo sticker booth.. and they let you add on backgrounds/stamps. its like adding a candy corn stamp to his head. its not actually ON his head.
it has improved although the cloth wrinkles on the guy's jacket is wrong. (sleeves)
eyes too slanted, and alil off. i think you might need a few more eyelid wrinkles?
perhaps more shadows in general. there are some places where they don't need to be as dark, and some where there needs to be more shades, etc.
keep up the good work.
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Vivya
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| Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:43 am Post subject: |
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| artisticjunke29 wrote: |
GAIA PERSON!!!!! x333
well. the candy corn STILL looks like someone just stuck a sticker on his head. like if you go to a photo sticker booth.. and they let you add on backgrounds/stamps. its like adding a candy corn stamp to his head. its not actually ON his head.
it has improved although the cloth wrinkles on the guy's jacket is wrong. (sleeves)
eyes too slanted, and alil off. i think you might need a few more eyelid wrinkles?
perhaps more shadows in general. there are some places where they don't need to be as dark, and some where there needs to be more shades, etc.
keep up the good work. |
like i said i don't want it too real so i didn't put too many details XD and the hat was ment to be that way. YUP YUP GAIA PERSON <3 |
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majikCarp
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Joined: Jun 05, 2005
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 8:09 pm Post subject: |
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VECTOR ART!!!
i need to learn how to use illustrator
stupid pen tool -__-
nice drawing
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eduardoblanco
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| Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:30 pm Post subject: |
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well Vivya, without a bad intention, that work adjust more a publicitary work, photoshop can do something like that in a couple of minutes, if we talking about drawing your work is more like comics genre, but you use light brown to outlines, that technique is used sometimes in manga and comics, but look the hand, the outlines disolves, that is not good in a artwork, in my opinion, don't match in a handwork, look more like computer work, try to imagine a sexy female in that technique.
The left eye is not visible, the pleats of clothe, look the sleeve down the hand, all the image is realistic, then the sleeve look artificial with out forget the candy corn.
I sugest try another kind of techiniques, but remember the manga and comics based in handwork, if you want I can put a lot of resources about learn drawing manga or comics, the problem is the time that cosume in practice and effort.
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YukiArashi
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| Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:59 pm Post subject: |
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Wow thats awsome!! 
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hazzard
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| Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 2:53 pm Post subject: |
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| i like vectors... n i think u did a really nice job here... everythings good xept da choice of character.. hahah ... i know im a lil piky..hahah |
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