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artisticjunke29
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 Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 9:45 am Post subject: Selfish People - Single Manga Page |
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[img:540:648:398524cea6]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/HTMLka0s/selfishppl.jpg[/img:398524cea6]
...Ya. New style? C&C?
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xkrazydog
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First person with the dark hair, i'm guessing is a girl right? Err... its kind of hard to tell. Some aspects of it looks like a girl, but the lips and expression makes it look like a guy. Also the guy on the bottom, his sillhouette looks a bit plain, like his torso and neck was kind of stretched. Aside from that it looks good for a manga.
Also, you should make the background stand out more. |
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artisticjunke29
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Those eyes aren't just for guys. Especially with a more realistic style. The expression is for her to be angry and pissed.
As for the guy's anatomy ... >.< yeah.. I noticed it after all of this. *sigh* I guess I still have some bad habits from my old style. xP
Background I had wanted it to be like that. Didn't want it to take the show but needed it to be there... It's not exactly the main focus ya know.
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anime-lite
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yea its true it does look like a man but it still pretty good,
the only thing about it is the girls lips..
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xkrazydog
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Owell, there is a plus for long bodies!
One: They are tall! Woohoo!
Two: Bet it feels awesome to hug them.
Three: The style looks very Shojo XD Which will draw the female crowd. *Hides from the fangirls* |
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artisticjunke29
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Yepyep. Shoujo. And then I kinda fell in love with Eureka and hyung tae kim's work.
[[ugh tall ppl are AWESOME to hug >///<!]]
*does the fangirl squeal* haha.. no. xD
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basala
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| Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 4:43 am Post subject: |
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| Nice little manga. Doing a one page manga is difficult but you did quite well I should think. |
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