Truth - Celeste

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

my OC Celeste for a group proj with some ppl from DA :]

She is a daughter of sin since her birth symbolizes the sin committed by heaven & hell.
Muahahaha. Fear my stupid use of cliches. XD;;

She searches for "truth"
What is truth? Hmmmmmm I wonder...

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full view plx?

[celestialessence] btw is the name of my website that is currently
.... underconstruction. *shot*
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majikCarp · Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 11:45 pm Post subject:

Not to be insulting but, did you mutiply your layers? Because I don't see any lines that define the borders. If that's how it was intended to look, then I'm sorry for giving you wrong critique xD. I like the depth you put into the wing/robe thing Smile

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xkrazydog · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 96

Looks like something that came out of Disgaea; Hour of Darkness XD. Looks good. kinda soft looking, but good.

ddogt432 · Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 4:25 pm Post subject:

i love the coloring, and overall, she looks great! but her head looks a bit skewed heavy on her left side and and her face seems a bit flat compared with the perspective of the rest of her body. also, her right shoulder is a little overextended. hope you find that helpful ^^
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naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

@majickCarp: You're not insulting ^^ i did use lots of multiple layers. TONS AND TONS *shot* i love my layers.. XD;

@xkrazydog: i think it's coz of the scarfy thing? *sees lots of scarves in that game... altho i've never played it? my brothe has it O_O;*

@ddgt432: thanks <3 yeah, i have this problem of making left sides of heads.. rather "heavy" as you say... haha, well, i am still learning afterall.
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artisticjunke29 · Conscript Joined: Nov 24, 2005 Posts: 166

very very nice. i like the details/background/etc.

i'm alil disappointed on how her right hand turned out =(

man.. i'm an official fan of your stuff now : D
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Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

I like the colouring job on the cloth parts. Really well done.
The outlines come out softly as well, it seems to make the colours stand out even better as well as the shading.
Heh, the above mentioned stuff in terms of anatomy, I think that could be fixed easily at the rate your work is improving.
I still struggle with colouring let alone different perspectives of anatomy T__T.
1 Art class in my entire life and it was an optional credit lol
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Bowser · Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:58 am Post subject:

I think the skin tone and wings are what were perticuarly well done in the pic......the skin looks quite realistic~(well, as far as realism goes into anime~lol)

The hair seems quite dull tho......and I guess the material could have some sharper tones.....
But otherwise, a good piccu^^

naruchan · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 19, 2004 Posts: 74

*practices so i can improve*
ahhh;; i've never been good at shading hair...
*loses patience* but it IS something i need to work on.
anatomyyyyy! T_T
i hoped when i took drawing last year that they'd teach it..
but no. it was mostly just ... copy this. or draw that. yeah :/

thanks for the critiques/comments <3
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