Personal Project - Read 1st Page > Chap. 5 DONE!

Long_Gun · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:20 pm Post subject:

x maybe you sould pm it first to thouse that are intrested, then when u get like 2 or 3 chapters done, then post it here, on ur first post like i did with mine.
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Xristyan · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:42 pm Post subject:

aight then..

when chapter 1 is finished anyone interested just PM me for the story....

and once i get like 3 chapters finished i will link it up from a site... or maybe one of the pages here.. :Dthen put the link in the first page... im not gonna post there all the text since i think my first page post is kinda long already.. Very Happy

so yeah..

edit: CHAPTER 1 COMPLETE!!!
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Long_Gun · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 2:26 pm Post subject:

wooo! pm'ed ya!

now for the waiting.....

the endless waiting

and more waiting

and more

and more

and more...........
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Xristyan · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:30 pm Post subject:

LG>> its been only like 4 hours worth.. Very Happy

not that long of a wait now is it.. Very Happy

lucky people that i am online almost every single day.. Very Happy

now go read and be bored.. hahaha.. Razz

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Kimmie-chan · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 11:31 pm Post subject:

I finished chappie 1~ !

xris next time you pm it to me...dont put it in a quote thingy...the font are too lil and I can't read it >.<

Puntuation and grammar-wise, I didn't pick up anything. I only noticed a couple spelling mistakes...mostly likely just typo's though.

Well chappie one for now is a little eventless, but that's expected since the story only just started, but I'm looking foward to see how the story progresses. Lol and I need to re-read ur character descriptions again...can't rememebr everyone yet.
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Xristyan · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 12:05 am Post subject:

kimi>> gomen gomen.. Very Happy

i took a look at how it looked and yeah.. it really is small.... it looked so much better in word... Confused

i think i better send it as a word file... and yeah... i saw some errors to when i reread it... Very Happy

thanks for taking the time to comment on the story... and yes, il try to make things move along in the succeeding chapters.. Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:16 am Post subject:

im print it out and read it in school today, i have to go, but i will tell u any mistakes u make ok?
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Destiny81 · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:26 am Post subject:

well it very nice storyline there xrist Smile

go ahead with the story i just can't wait for chapter 2 Cool

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Xristyan · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 6:15 pm Post subject:

Destiny81 · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:28 pm Post subject:

Xristyan · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:10 pm Post subject:

des>> WRONG!!!! read the first page again and see what is typed there...

i did not post chapter one... that is strictly by request... Confused

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Destiny81 · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 5:38 am Post subject:

Xristyan · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:29 am Post subject:

des>> hehehe just messin with yah dude.. don't take it too hard.. Very Happy

if you want the PM i can just send it there.. Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 8:34 pm Post subject:

heres ur review dude,

little slow, but its what i expect from a chapter 1 in any story, its great though.

now, i ran this by my editor (kinda had no schoice....she snunk up on me) and she had a field day with it...u want the work?
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Xristyan · Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 8:51 pm Post subject:

LG>> that is very much appreciated.. Very Happy

heck im no writer so im sure any editor would have a field day with my work.. ahhaha... Very Happy

so give it to me... if its really bad then i might just retract my chapter one and put up the edited version.. Very Happy

chapter 2 nearly done... Very Happy

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