Personal Project - Read 1st Page > Chap. 5 DONE!

Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:59 am Post subject:

Yay!! I can comment about them!!!

1st>> hmmm I really like the armor, but the head looks off... =\

2nd>> I see why this was in the rejected pile, when I stare at this drawing, nothing in it really stands out for me. So making it as one of the main characters would be a bad choice

3rd>> the chest plate looks 2d.. =\

4th>> hmmm this looks different from his other works, the body goes inward too much, looks anorexic. =P

5th>> I love the hat!!! =D, doesnt really look like a fighter. But you cant judge a book by its cover. Razz

I picture him holding an instrument like a guitar or something XD

6th>> Wow, I like this one. if your friend edited this one somehow so she could fit your mage Luna Stardrop. Very Happy

I like the head.

7th>> makes me think of venow or spawn, minus the arms. The armor on the legs are too big for me, it makes him look as if the character was shrunk by gravity. Razz

K, that's pretty much it. =D
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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:43 am Post subject:

this are pretty much not gonna be used as is.. but you know that already.. Very Happy

im trying to get my friend to mix and match stuff now...

the first one might not be used at all or if ever i might just put him as a side character or somethign...

second one has a good body but il have to get rid of the head... Razz

then add on some things and he might make it as one of the main ones if all goes well or if it fits.. Very Happy

third is rejected in totallity.. Razz

4th looks nice aside from that anorexic stomach... and the weapons might be discarded and replaced with a glaive or naginata if your familiar with the term.. Very Happy

i might put in 5 with the mech rider if i can tweak it a little bit more.. refine it to my taste.. Razz

6th is a candidate for Luna Stardrop but still needs a lot of refining... and that is the closest my friend can draw a girl... so he needs lots and lots of learning to do.. Razz

7th also rejected all out but might use the head and chest design on some of the other characters... say talan stormwind??
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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:05 pm Post subject:

Hmmm, so are you gonna keep the hat for the mech rider? Very Happy

But you know, you should do the way you want your characters to be. Razz

Hmmm the first one as a side character?? I suppose so. Not much of a main character. Laughing

And yes I've heard of a naginata, but glaive... I just cant picture it in my head. I might have seen it but I rarely hear that term. Confused

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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:18 pm Post subject:

atashi>> a glaive IS a naginata....

maybe il keep the hat.. who knows.. im still thinking about it.. Very Happy

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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:23 pm Post subject:

Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:30 pm Post subject:

atashi>> yeah i got that..

well i dunno.. i was thinking of making the assassin a little more refined... since it was already a century after the war... so he would uhm be a bit decorated.. Very Happy

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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:36 pm Post subject:

Hmmm yeah I can see that. Very Happy

Riiiiite a century after the war. *slaps my forehead* I forgot. Razz

Hmmm so we have 3 characters down and possibly 3 drawings that might be used after a lil mix and match. Meaning you got about 6 more to go. Very Happy

Good luck with taht buddy. Razz

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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:41 pm Post subject:

check the first page again and you will see we got 4 down already... Very Happy

and yeah 3 more after a little tweaking... so 5 more to go..

not to mention all the other side characters and the villains, main and side into the thing.. hahaha.... Razz

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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:48 pm Post subject:

Hahhahahahaha, Oh yes how did I forget about the half demon?!?! Hahaha I mean we had a page discussing about his weapon. Laughing

Oh man, side characters and villians?! Shocked

Well let us concentrate on the immortals for now. Laughing

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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:53 pm Post subject:

after my discussion with an acquaintance in the philippines the outline of THE WHOLE story is defined.. so i know how its gonna end i know the timeline of major events... and seeing that there is gonna be lots of side characters and villains and not to mention monsters....

we got hurroks, centaurs, minotaurs, furies, dragons, dragoons, basilisk, stormwings, werewolves, all manner of demons, trolls, ogres, giants, balrogs...

am not too sure if i should put orcs though...
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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:14 pm Post subject:

Oh my goodness. Shocked

Such an interesting story you have there. I must say that if this was a game, I would truely consider buying it. Kinda like a God of War thing. Very Happy

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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:33 pm Post subject:

speaking of gods im still pondering on whether i should make the divinities take an active role in the whole story you know like making intervention... but that would like broaden the whole thing waay waaaaaay big.. which doubles my work.. Razz

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Atashi · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:43 pm Post subject:

Whatever you think would be best for your story, it would be kind of interesting to see the divinities participating in the activities of the immortals. But... now that I think about it... wouldnt it be dull to see how the gods intervene and chose the outcome of the story?? Confused

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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:55 pm Post subject:

Atashi · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:16 am Post subject:

Hahahaha, wow this story has alot of potential.

Can't wait to see it and read it. Too bad you know everything bout the story like how it ends. *shrugs* well you'll have the pleasure of creating it and being known as it's creator. With your friend as the Illustrator of course. =D
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