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Atashi
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Wow...this didnt go anywhere at all....
Well then here's another post from me just to help you along a lil bit. 
Sorry I've been gone for so long. ^^;;;
Next time might be a lil longer.
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Xristyan
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| Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:20 am Post subject: |
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it won't go anywhere if you aren't here since i think your the only one that comments on this thread to make it move.... hazzard helps a bit but he doesn't post as much and others are just one time commentors... 
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Atashi
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| Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 8:34 am Post subject: |
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Well it's the next page.
Soooooo, I think it's time for you to like give us a summary of the next character.
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Xristyan
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| Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:53 pm Post subject: |
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| Atashi wrote: |
Well it's the next page.
Soooooo, I think it's time for you to like give us a summary of the next character. |
now hold your horses... esmond is a bit tricky since he has a mech...
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Atashi
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| Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:20 pm Post subject: |
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| Xristyan wrote: |
| Atashi wrote: |
Well it's the next page.
Soooooo, I think it's time for you to like give us a summary of the next character. |
now hold your horses... esmond is a bit tricky since he has a mech... |
Hmmm it's been about 12 days.....how bout now?
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Xristyan
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| Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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hahaha...
hush...
im working on it...
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Atashi
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| Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 9:01 am Post subject: |
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| Xristyan wrote: |
hahaha...
hush...
im working on it...
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Really?? Am I your muse or something that pushes you onward to write your story?? 
jk
Ok then do when you're ready I suppose.
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Long_Gun
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| Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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sooo....any idea on when ull have it finnished? or u dont know? hell i'd settle for an Percentage. lol, u'll let me see it when ur done right?
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Xristyan
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LG>> as i said in the earlier pages i have no clue at all.. it solely depends on my whim.. if my imaginations go wild or it slows down.. or whatever...
i do have the whole story pictured in my head already.. as in beginning.. ending.. and climax parts.. now the details are a bit hard since well.. im not that erm... good anymore with my writing..
tomorrow.. il put up Esmond.. 
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Long_Gun
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ah so u have it 100% complete in ur head and like umm 30-40% done on paper? lol, i jsut wanna know, cuz im refairing from reading it till it gets over 70%
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after poring over Esmond's background i looked at it and thought that it was too detailed and kinda off for a simple background... so i ditched the whole idea and just did this..
ESMOND FURRIC
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The Furric clan has always been known throughout Terra to be a family of superb craftsmen. Having built the most innovative contraptions and gadgets from the simple daily lives to warfare they have built their reputation in the quality of their work. Esmond Furric is particularly popular with his invention of the Desert Skimmer. The Desert Skimmer is a huge contraption for the transportation of people and goods along the vast flatlands of Terra.
But the crowning glory of Esmond Furric came from the War of the Corrupt, when he created the Iron Brawler, a massive metallic device that is operated by a soldier from within and acts as the very armor of the individual. These helped the united armies of Terra be at level with the giants and ogres of the Corrupted armies.
Esmond is not only a craftsman but a soldier as well. He sported his own unique iron brawler which he used himself on the battlefield. Only he may be able to wield this particular iron brawler and use it to its full potential. And with that he fought alongside Duke and the rest of the Blades to stop the advancing armies or the Corrupt. |
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*looks at pic* u know.....we should combin ur pic skills with my story telling skills........that be a great idea......u cover minor details like the map and locations very well, and i cover everything else...ha ha, this sound great at first but now that ive thought it over for a few more secs, i have no clue how this whould work out.
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| Long_Gun wrote: |
| *looks at pic* u know.....we should combin ur pic skills with my story telling skills........that be a great idea......u cover minor details like the map and locations very well, and i cover everything else...ha ha, this sound great at first but now that ive thought it over for a few more secs, i have no clue how this whould work out. |
i don't get it either...
pic skills??? erm.. if you mean drawing then im out since im not the one who drew those stuff... i describe them though..
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Xris>>> I've noticed that the third blade, Talan Stormwind uses a sharp bladed tonfa during his assassin days. He also resembles the guy from Hellboy.
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Xristyan
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Tong: that is exactly where i got my image model of the character... though he ain't ugly behind the mask.. on the contrary he has looks..
weird for an assassin to have an unscathed face though.. but that just tells that he is that good..
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