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NeL · Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:25 am Post subject:

hmmm.......... chapter 3 in revision status......

have just read the last 2 chapters xrist, well, the intro's good, but there hasn't been really a certain "plot" or a "happening" that will trigger story development. I hope chapter 3 would have one!

Anyways, keep up the good work xris! i'll be there to help you ever and ever!!! Very Happy

Xristyan · Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 2:09 pm Post subject:

nel>> well to tell you one thing i don't think there is still anything going on.. Very Happy

chapter 3's style is different from the first two... a whole lot different so yeah...

in any case.. il use chapter 3 to put all the characters together.. and then we make things roll at 4... Very Happy

i may have to use interims on my novel to move things along.. Confused

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Long_Gun · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:08 am Post subject:

whens chapter 3 going to be officaly done?
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Xristyan · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 1:45 pm Post subject:

LG>> i have no idea...

depends on how i feel at the moment i might be able to finish it by the end of the week.. IF i feel it... Very Happy

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NeL · Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:26 am Post subject:

xris>> don't rush at it, give it a real good amount of time cause i want something real good ^_^

Xristyan · Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 3:40 pm Post subject:

nel>> yes, we ALL want something good...

well hmmm im not sure if it looks rushed.. but things are finally moving along... and im still in chapter 3.. i better close that chapter up so we can move on to some action... Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 6:07 pm Post subject:

x> u cna allways keep oging and cut it later....thats what i sometimes do, ill keep going till i hit writers block, and decide how much ill releace then...
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Xristyan · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:33 pm Post subject:

LG>> the thing is i have it pictured already in my head chapter by chapter.. i know what happens on one chapter.. you know that my problem is how to put it in writing... Confused

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Long_Gun · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:39 pm Post subject:

X> i know that all to well....

*cough* WRITERS BLOCK!

dam...i need to stop my home movies...ha ha...i can see 1ce fighitng you as itatchi...hmmm
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Xristyan · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 8:22 pm Post subject:

LG>> what?? 1ce is fighting me?? and here i was thinking he could be an ally or something.. Confused

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Long_Gun · Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:08 am Post subject:

x> he said he didnt want to be evil....i may includ him later....hmm...now that v-boi and raiden are gone...like realyl gone...maybe i chould kill them off or something...ha ha, jk...
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Xristyan · Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:42 pm Post subject:

LG>> i get tabs on killing them!!!! Very Happy

oh man.. ok then.. so 1ce is one of the good guys.. oh no!!!

edit: BTW CHAPTER 3 DONE!!!
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Long_Gun · Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 7:46 pm Post subject:

SEND IT!

i whould like to read the latest chapter in this seriers
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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:05 am Post subject:

email sent...

don't hold back now... Very Happy

anyone else wants a copy?
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Kimmie-chan · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:14 am Post subject:

chappie 3 plz!

I didn't even know it was done T_T
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