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Ghostevolution
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 Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:51 am Post subject: Been a long time since i left you |
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i shouldn't have left you without a dope beat to step to!
hey everyone its been a long time. hope yall are doing well. here are a couple of quick sketches i did for some friends. hope you like them! peace
[IMG:315:467:25b09e3c2e]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v712/ghostevolution/comissions/Paraparaprincess.jpg[/img:25b09e3c2e]
[IMG:371:503:25b09e3c2e]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v712/ghostevolution/comissions/dpsketch2.jpg[/img:25b09e3c2e] |
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Atashi
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| Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 7:06 am Post subject: |
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Incredible....
That's all I have to say to you.
Keep on posting pics!!! 
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Xristyan
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nice....
though the breast of the girl is kinda erm.. saggy but still pointing outward kinda thing... well anyways.. its still awesome.. maybe you could do some of the female characters in my story if your interested.. hahaha... 
keep up the good work!!! expecting to see more...
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Atashi
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| Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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| xristyan wrote: |
| though the breast of the girl is kinda erm.. saggy but still pointing outward kinda thing... well anyways.. its still awesome.. maybe you could do some of the female characters in my story if your interested.. hahaha... |
Hahahaha, please take the request. He's being finding people to draw out the female characters and it's been going sour. =.=;;;
You should read his story on the first page, it shows great potential.
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Haven9270
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Joined: Aug 03, 2004
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| Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:25 pm Post subject: |
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The girl's boobs is angled wrong considering the pose/perspective you were going for. Same goes for her face/head.
Plus her body doesn't curve dramatically enough. I don't know the right words to explain it.
Judging from that pic especially the secong pic, it seems you have a decent knowledge of human anatomy.
Talking about the second pic, don't be afraid to put body parts at an angle. A lot of artist seem to always play it safe by giving their characters a symmetrical pose - everything has to be seen and seen with "correct measurements.
Why not play with it a little more.
Like dramatic poses viewed in dramatic angles (3 point perspective, fish lense camera etc.)
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Atashi
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| Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:48 am Post subject: |
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| Haven9270 wrote: |
The girl's boobs is angled wrong considering the pose/perspective you were going for. Same goes for her face/head.
Plus her body doesn't curve dramatically enough. I don't know the right words to explain it. |
I see it now... wonder why I didnt see it before. 
Well it must have been how cool it looked to me. I wasnt really focused on the criticism. 
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