Long_gun's Fanfiction (help me find a name for it!)

Long_Gun · Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 3:16 pm Post subject:

bah, u and ur sappy love storys....*gets several stares* allright, fine...ill try it atleast once....

onantoher note, chapter 4 is done and posted. so read it....and love it
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Kimmie-chan · Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:58 pm Post subject:

Awe... I thought chappie 4 was going to be longer Very Happy

Oh and nice save on switching Raiden back to being a boy XD

Can't wait till the next chapter. I wanna see more fights Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:17 pm Post subject:

i havent.....yet...i just explained how he became a girl..... ha ha

im still sure hes gona kill me though
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Destiny81 · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:41 am Post subject:

lol since when raiden become a girl??? i almost burst into laughing when i see his detail Embarassed

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Long_Gun · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:00 pm Post subject:

raiden was a girl in the frist 3 chapters, on the 4th one, i had to try and change him back, so i thought of a creative way of explaining how he bacame a girl.
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trueline · Pure Hope Joined: Jun 13, 2006 Posts: 5134

nice one long gun but still why its too short unlike the others
Crying or Very sad

im waiting for the next part ^_^
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Cherry-Kun · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject:

so now im a mehanai minnion??? lol, you sure have some imagination

cool thing that ultima is part of my group

waiiiiiiiiii for evillnes!!!!!!! Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:19 pm Post subject:

yes cherry, u are a minion off mehanai! we will all fear you! let us bow to ur feet! ha ha,

line>oro? this one was short? its 6 pages, all my other chapters were 6-8 pages too...but il ltell u this, i dobelive chapter 5 will be longer. just sit tight ok?
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Xristyan · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:46 pm Post subject:

LG>> 6-8 pages normal eh..

damn it.. im on my eighth page of my story and i still can't close chapter one... T___T
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v-boi2002 · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:05 pm Post subject:

Dude, Kimmie's teddy bear...It reminds me of Tokunaga.

Aint that right, Anise?
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Xristyan · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:46 pm Post subject:

aight.. finally had time to read it.. it was a relatively short read i might say.. but very informative.. a new character and a few other previews of other characters... but that was quite a fast and simple explanation for raiden.. hahaha and i thought it was big mistery thing... nice comeback on that.. Very Happy

keep it up dude.. Very Happy

oh and im getting to see some subtle differences in them.. Very Happy

so its turning really good.. Very Happy

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Long_Gun · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:02 am Post subject:

x>> i know ud be the first to spot thouse, ha ha.

hmmm raiden poor raiden....raiden will kill me someday, but oh well, tiem for a gender swap!

ur on 8 pages and still cant close chapter one? lol, i orginaly had my first 3 chapters all one chapter, but it felt too big to me so i cut it into three...so yeah, just keep going and when u hit writers block, find a place that u can cut easly, and call it chapter 1!

v-boi> i havent seen that anime/manga, so, yeah...my orginal idea....isnt orginal anymore is it?
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Xristyan · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:33 am Post subject:

LG>> hehehe... well i already finished it and after fine tuning managed to put it to relatively 6 pages... Very Happy

so yeah... Very Happy

so you're currently working on chapter 5 now eh.. good job.. Very Happy

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ultimasome · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:25 am Post subject:

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 11:44 am Post subject:

ultima> im a man!!! im 18 now Very Happy

hohohohohohohoho!!!

......"im a goofy-goober yes!, you are a goofy-goober yes!"....

LG> it was good that you xplained that raiden became a girl by mehanai's whim, and that detail stands out her evillness
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