new drawing!!!! (it's better than last time, i promise ;) )

shonenjumpgirl · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jan 26, 2006 Posts: 226

This is shonenjumpgirl getting prepared to fight. A monster ripped some of her shirt and pants. I'm trying to make a story like xrityn is lol. So there r 2 versions of the drawings, pencil and digitally inked.

Please tell me how i improved and what i need working on.

pencil

[IMG:533:800:7cb0d65b9f]http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/Shonenjumpgirl/Picture-1.jpg[/img:7cb0d65b9f]

digitally inked

[IMG:550:400:7cb0d65b9f]http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/Shonenjumpgirl/shonenjumpgirlpreparing.gif[/img:7cb0d65b9f]

enjoy!![/img]

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 10:00 pm Post subject:

pretty nice!!!

i like it, but as an advice make lines fro the limits of the hair, they have to be above of the head Wink

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shonenjumpgirl · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jan 26, 2006 Posts: 226

finished version (and better too Smile

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had to recolor it and reinked it too, 2hrs and 45 mins, wasted Sad

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[IMG:663:800:b49f1589e6]http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/Shonenjumpgirl/shonenjumpgirlpreparing.jpg[/img:b49f1589e6]

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:28 pm Post subject:

that looks really good, i still dont uderstand that ink thing.

is it painted with markers or smthn like that???
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Froste · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:30 am Post subject:

color job is great... did you do it with a mouse or d'you have a tablet?

the clothes look nice too, the... geh. folds (?) look natural which is pretty difficult to do Wink

the hands seem a little small to me, and the neck is sorta... er. thick, otherwise the proportions are good Wink

i'm thinking you made the hair like that on purpose, but... yea, some more detail on the hair would really lift the art, methinks xP

other than that, great job ^_^ if you do make a story, be sure to post it, aight? Wink

shonenjumpgirl · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jan 26, 2006 Posts: 226

i inked it with macromedia flash and i did it with a mouse

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:30 pm Post subject:

damn!!!! just witht the mouse???......*sigh*.......my hand shakes so much i cant do that kind of draws just with the mouse TT_TT
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Destiny81 · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:24 am Post subject:

well shonen.........all i can say is that your drawing is almost perfect there the only main problem is with the head area and also the hair.........

the head look abit large do you notice it Smile

and the hair need some adjustment Wink

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shonenjumpgirl · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jan 26, 2006 Posts: 226

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 6:24 pm Post subject:

shonene> its alright. im a spanish speaker, spanish is my mother language

you do that kind of stuff??? sweeeeettt!!!!!

create a space at devianart too!!! i'll add you to my friends list Very Happy

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shonenjumpgirl · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jan 26, 2006 Posts: 226

Cherry-Kun · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:37 am Post subject:

shonen> why??? you just need to upload a 100x100 pic 4 a preview.
make one in PS and thats it Very Happy

post the link to your site!!! i'll add you to my friends list
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caat · newbie! Joined: Nov 18, 2006 Posts: 5

wooooow nice i like ur pics Very Happy

Fiuri · newbie! Joined: Nov 26, 2006 Posts: 8

nice ... but it cud be better if u express the hair more ^^

trueline · Pure Hope Joined: Jun 13, 2006 Posts: 5134

hoe come i havent post here
ok ur drawing is good and yup as u said it improved much
than before ...
so good work shonenjumpgirl ^_^
u just need to color it Smile

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