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KaRei
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 Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:19 pm Post subject: Luneu - Secrets of Moon [NEW pages 6-10] |
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This is a story of place that everybody of you know, but don't know it's true nature. We can see it each day, but most of us won't reach it. This is story about our Moon and secrets that are hidden behind its silver shine.
At first it was a novel I tried to write, but for you I'm bringing it as a comics. It's a fantasy story, but anything connected with humans or Earth was developed to fit the real world. It's like a Matrix or a religion: things may sounds unbelievable, but you can't say that it's absolutely impossible.
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Part 1 - Return
- A needle in a heap of hay (in progress)
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Part 1 - Return
A needle in a heap of hay
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Xristyan
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| Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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cool another story!!!
interesting enough.. one of the continents in MY story is called Terra as well.. 
reminds me of that anime... yoake something something crescent love.. but im guessing yours is way different since you included a third race..
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KaRei
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:27 am Post subject: |
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cool another story!!!
interesting enough.. one of the continents in MY story is called Terra as well..
reminds me of that anime... yoake something something crescent love.. but im guessing yours is way different since you included a third race.. |
- Some "story" will come later. For now I'm going only to introduce the world. It's something like a huge background.
- Yes, our planet has very fitting name to many things. Long live Terra.
- I don't know that anime. But you're on a right way that this has a large inspiration in some anime. At first I created it as a parallel story to Sailor Moon. Later it began changing in what it is now. There are still visible some similarities with the anime. |
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Xristyan
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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ahhh i see... so your developing the setting first...
solidifying the grounds on which your story flourishes..
will be expecting more to come..
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KaRei
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Prologue
Spring 1949, England, Salisbury plains
A calmness is ruling the plains. Countryside is drowning in dark of spring's night only slightly alighted by full moon. Around forests are being created fog patches and a silence is from time to time cutted by owl's ululation. Light fresh wind is combing through a grass with its invisible comb, where crickets are playing their neverending concert. Everything, as already for milleniums, is guarded by ancient Stonehenge clothed into silver garb weaved by moon looking on it from its skyey high. As an everlasting guardian. As an everlasting guardian in silver armour Stonehenge majestically dominates its surroundings. The peace here is under a strange magical protection of its cold stones.
Suddenly as a lightning from the sky a ray of silver light flew down and with a stroke of thunder it hitted an altar of stone shrine. The wind combed the grass in all dirrections from Stonehenge and the altar itself began shining with that strange silver light. Shadows of other stones were extending to wide surroundings. Everything shuted up. Even the crickets stopped playing their compound. Everything was looking towards the altar. The shine was then slowly weakening until it disappeared at all and the night seized the countryside again as nothing happened.
Spring 2000, England, Salisbury plains
Half of century passed and the break of milleniums was getting near. Spring was only on its beginning and England was still drowsing in morning dimness. Just was ending night similar as that 50 years ago. Leaves of trees began whisper and wind began blowing stronger. Something is going to happen. Something strange. Eyes of animals was again looking towards the stone shrine. They were full of expectations. And something was really happening. The altar began shining again like the light fell asleep inside and now it was awaking. Shadows of standing stones again elongated in far distance. But now ... now with the increasing day light the shine was agglomerating itself into tiny sparklets hovering in the air. They slowly began circle around the Stonehenge and around its altar. And in the twister of the sparklets suddenly appeared a small bird. The sparklets then began falling on the feathery body of that critter and was slowly sinking through its feathers and skin into its internal. After last sparklet disappeared this way a dove was sitting on the altar stone. She was white as a fresh snow in mountains. She opened her blue eyes and looked around. On the east was already effusing a golden shine of sun rising from its bed. When first sun rays fell on the Stonehenge, the dove stretch herself by limber wave of her wings and flew up. Soon she was disappearing in the shine of rising disc of golden sun.
Below her was passing an English countryside. Hundreds of small fields was spreading from east to west and from north to south. Only few tiny forest resisting the walk of time and agriculture of humans was making the scenery more interesting. Between the fields was serpentining narrow roads connecting the small villages of eastern England. Terrain was still little bit hilly and the dove with each top of hill was hoping that this will be the last one and that after it she'll see her final destination. But only another fields was awaiting her, with another hill in a distance. As she was more to the east, small villages was replaced by small towns. A density of human settlements was increasing with each mile. After hours of fly, the fields was slowly replaced by town agglomerations and agricultural land was replaced by industrial one. Between roofs of houses the dove saw some sparking in the distance. A water. It was a river going through this cluster of towns. She took her powers and with new breath she joined the river, flying along its banks. She was almost at the finish. After a while last fields disappeared and was replaced by few city parks. She's at the end of her trip. Below her is the largest metropolis of British Isles, London.
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KaRei
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Part 1 - Return
A needle in a heap of hay
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KaRei
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I placed the chapter in the first post. First page is splitted now into two to allow display it larger and see texts better. And you can find there 3 new pages.
Story line is little bit slow (it's novel based), but slowly we'll reveal true origin of that dove and her task in London. And don't worry, doves and pigeons aren't the main characters of this story.  |
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KaRei
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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| Uff. 5 new pages are up. Scroll up to first post. |
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ViperXtreme
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| Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 2:08 am Post subject: |
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interesting,i will be watching this 
man, i wish i had enough patience to draw those detailed backgrounds >.< |
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Destiny81
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| Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 8:27 am Post subject: |
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nice hand drawing karei!!!
and a nice story line as well, i am very attracted to your story as well, hope to see more of this 
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