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xenocrisis0153
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| Angel_Armz wrote: |
| Chapter 2 will be posted this weekend. |
nice, can't wait!
I read the chapter 1.... but I guess I missed the prelude. Can you PM it to me, please?
haha... Luna is part of NERV ^____^
and when you said mille-feullie, I was thinking of Milfeulle from Galaxy Angel who is named after the dessert (she likes to bake, get it?) and I knew it was an asian coastline... clever clever
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Angel_Armz
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 9:57 am Post subject: |
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| haha... Luna is part of NERV ^____^ |
I just used the name for the sake of it. No real relation to the real NERV from Evangelion.
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| and when you said mille-feullie, I was thinking of Milfeulle from Galaxy Angel who is named after the dessert (she likes to bake, get it?) and I knew it was an asian coastline... clever clever |
YAY! Though I kind of expected Xeno to caught it. I was gonna put in a specific country but it didn't pass censor and it would've created bad stereotype.
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but I guess I missed the prelude. Can you PM it to me, please?
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Please wait.
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LuNa_BLaNCa
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 9:59 pm Post subject: |
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-sighs- we've been waiting fooreeeeeever lil man... -.-;;
my legs driving me crazy with its twitching! -been sitting patiently for the story to come out-
when is it gonna be posted? ;-;
-reads previous posts-...oh <.<;; well i guess i can wait..till tom....-goes off to buy some truffles, comes back and sits down in my lil corner- =9
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Angel_Armz
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:25 am Post subject: |
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Imma post chapter 2 like half hour after this post. Heres pictures cause I suck at describing machine and the such.
A small representation of our Patrol boat AKA The Raider ... somewhat. Ignore the flag.
[img:290:212:101ac188bc]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/05/PBR_Mark_II_full_speed.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
The LCVP (Land Craft Vehicle Personnel), ignore the flag again.
[img:400:295:101ac188bc]http://home.sprynet.com/~kier/LCVP.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
GM Ground Type (From the 08th MS Team)
[img:150:213:101ac188bc]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/9/92/RGM-79G.GIF/150px-RGM-79G.GIF[/img:101ac188bc]
And its 100 mm Machine Gun
[img:300:133:101ac188bc]http://www.mahq.net/mecha/gundam/08thmsteam/lineart/rx-79g-machinegun.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
Saberfish (From Mobile Suit Gundam)
[img:400:246:101ac188bc]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/1/1f/Ff-s3.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
Zaku Type 2 (From Mobile Suit Gundam)
[img:180:216:101ac188bc]http://content.answers.com/main/content/wp/en/thumb/c/cb/180px-MS-06F.GIF[/img:101ac188bc]
Its 120 mm Machine Gun and Bazooka
[img:300:101:101ac188bc]http://www.mahq.net/mecha/gundam/msgundam/lineart/ms-06-machinegun.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
[img:299:255:101ac188bc]http://www.mahq.net/mecha/gundam/msgundam/lineart/ms-06-zakubazooka.jpg[/img:101ac188bc]
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xenocrisis0153
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:52 am Post subject: Re: Apocalypse Now: A-S Version |
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Chapter 2 Comments...
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| Angel: Just stick your butt out the edge and pray you don’t fall. And don’t make a stain on this boat or else you’re going to have to clean it! |
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I'll hold it in
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| Lastly, we have our chief, Xeno Chris, who was the driver of the boat. Like War and Dave, he was also from the US. He was the oldest one in the team, perhaps around the age of twenty-seven. I often see him reading some sort of A-S Moe Magazine while piloting the boat. He’s probably an Idol Otaku. It’s funny how I saw Mikuru on one of his Magazine cover. My first thought was she must’ve lured him into joining A-S.on T.V. or during a public speech. Of all the members, he was probably the most Gun-Ho in the group. Always ranting about fighting and honor. |
LOL... yup... I want A-S Moe Magazine!!
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Angel: Gentlemen, if I made have a word with you all. ... Or, you can stay with me and finish this job and have HQ reward us with front row tickets to Yui Horie’s next concert.
I only heard a loud supporting roar from Xeno. The rest just continued to stare at me and were ever so silent. |
hahaha, that's me alright!!! Youko's seiyuu singing.... so dreamy!!!
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Kimmie-chan
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:47 am Post subject: |
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Man I wish i had read the previos posts on the lowdown on the mecha stuff before I actually read the chapter...
But none the less, very good chappie IMO AA. The 'war' situation was really well put, and I could see everything while I was reading it. I really like the way you describe things. Just a few typo's and grammitcal things. But yeah looking forward to chappie 3 
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:38 am Post subject: |
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I only heard a loud supporting roar from Xeno. The rest just continued to stare at me and were ever so silent.
Angel: Okay … I’ll persuade them for tickets for ... ummmmmmmmm … the next S.O.S. Brigade concert.
The entire men on the Raider shouted and screamed with laughter. |
i luv this part the best....
genryou: so, in the team, xeno was the one and only fan of yui horie?....poor yurie..
yurie horie: T_______T *sob*
genryou: lol, dun cry yurie, u r actually far more popular than haruhi, believe me....
haruhi: *kick gen's face* dun stick ur tongue where it doesnt belong, young man...
genryou: jeez, why r u here?
haruhi: i come here to invite u to enter the army.....disagree and ur head will roll....
genryou: invite my foot, u r actually trying to forced me....my answer will be no, and hell no..... dun ever think ur blackmail trick would works against me.....
haruhi: tsk...
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LuNa_BLaNCa
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:57 pm Post subject: |
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o-O gen has a problem...xD haha
great chappie lil man! ^-^
i loved brit's soap prank xD
probably cause i can easily picture him doing that 
and ur toilet thing...ewww...xP i'd rather purporsely constipate myself then have to do that -.-;
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KaRei
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:46 am Post subject: |
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You wrote it in really atractive way. I felt like in the middle of all that. Great job.
Only the jokes that were already introduced in spoilers were, emm, already known 
They would do better job if you would keep them in secret.  |
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kyosuke-date
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| Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 9:23 am Post subject: |
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It was worth waiting !!
It's pretty good, congrats ^___^
The strory's becomin more and more interesting !!!
There's some probs with the typo but it's not that much disturbing
Keep writing !!
We're waitin for the chap 3, good luck ! |
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TheLoneBrit101
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| Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:35 pm Post subject: |
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*ponts quivering finger at Angel*
What was that?!?!?!
*Zombies pop out of ground and throw custard pies at angel*
Why the hell am I only a private???
Come on! A commissioned second lieutenant at least, please.
But it was all good. Trying my best here to keep my impatience inside waiting fo chapter 3...
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Angel_Armz
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| Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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From now on, there will be a 80% chance that the sneak peek is a fake.
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Why the hell am I only a private???
Come on! A commissioned second lieutenant at least, please. |
Theres only 5 people on a little patrol boat -_-
But hey, you have a better fate then most people.
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Actually, not really. I'll stop spoiling it. -_-
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Cherry-Kun
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| Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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xD yu horie's concert tickets as a reward for being in war??? hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!
man, that surelly worths the lots and lots of dead people xD
hey you! yes you lazy pseudo Angel!!! when am i supposed to make my great debut as the Abimael Guzman of this story??? haaaa???
*pokes*
come on!!! write!!!
*poke*
*poke*
xD
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Kita-Asuna
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| Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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WOW those must be some REALLY REALLY Nice tickets to have cost so much lives.
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xenocrisis0153
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| Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 6:24 am Post subject: |
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| Cherry-Kun wrote: |
| xD yu horie's concert tickets as a reward for being in war??? hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!! |
sign me up, sign me up!!
oh wait, I'm already in the war
hmmmmm... maybe some KOTOKO tickets will get me to sign on for a second tour ^____^
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