Apocalypse Now: A-S Version

Angel_Armz · Rosen Ritter~ Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983

Well .... seeing how the last chapter was like a month ago, if you want I could post half of chapter 5 and then add the rest when I finish this weekend ...

If you crazy kids want ...

BTW, the next music theme is Nothing by No One ... hmmmmmm maybe I should check if there really such a song and artist.
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Kimmie-chan · Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 7:48 am Post subject:

AA--> Wa... its been a month already??

Well I personally rather a whole finished chapter, but if the others want half now and half later I dont mind either.
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ultimasome · Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 8:46 am Post subject:

I dont mind either
i wanna see some of what ya wrote...i think i saw some ^^;
If ya wanted us to wait for another month to finish the other half i dont mind...since im having exams ^^;;
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genryou · Ronin Samurai Joined: Dec 13, 2004 Posts: 760

i prefer the whole chapter rather than juz half of it....

take all the time u want AA, quality is what we prefer the most...
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trueline · Pure Hope Joined: Jun 13, 2006 Posts: 5134

no and never post anything till u finish it all unless u wanna send it to me via pm then no problem >->;;

otherwise don't and dare do that. Its for ur story's sake ^____^
*poke*

u just write, write, write and write
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LuNa_BLaNCa · Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:33 am Post subject:

well dunno if its too late for me to put input on it...but i agree with theses other cool peoples (surprisingly LOL)

giving half now half later will only bug me so yeah <.<;;

so write lil man! write like the wind! LOL! xD
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trueline · Pure Hope Joined: Jun 13, 2006 Posts: 5134

*ahem* i know its not the time but ...already finished chapter two >__>;;
here what i see:

nice progress and description(although it wasnt with every details, i consider it as a positive point cause precisly descriptive give boredom and especially in minor events) of the battle is getting along well with the plot. I see the conversation playing an important role to give an image of each characters but its kinda short. umm *drolls* mmm what a chocolat, kinder always tasty..oops uh..err yes back to the topic >->;;

There is nothing to say about the setting since you stick to an imagenray places from the start and, therefore, the events take its locations. Same goes with the time and as of now it isnt that imporantat to be mentioned.
the most interesting in this chapter is the expressions of the people and their reaction. Its ending is quite excited (remind me of animes' style when they end each episode with exciting part). i'm not talking about the sneak peak which only gives suspense.

so chapter three will be in jungle hmmm...i need a break.
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Angel_Armz · Rosen Ritter~ Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983

Its almost done, well be posted by Wednesday, just need to finish 4 more sub-chapters (finished 5 so far). Believe me I barely did any writing on this weekend. It was all my slow connection fault. If it finish my DL of Hellsing OVA 3 I would have been writing all day on Saturday. And mother's day took all my day so ... yeah ... its not my fault!

Anyways just wanted to post some pictures.

[img:520:244:f5d93de083]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/8/86/Machete_knife_blade.jpg[/img:f5d93de083]
Heres a Machete.

[img:2334:798:f5d93de083]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/ac/FAMAS_dsc06877.jpg[/img:f5d93de083]
The FAMAS

[IMG:800:600:f5d93de083]http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q109/HeroicHenry/Anime/1175395568378.jpg[/img:f5d93de083]
A light blue/white ... dress or long skirt ... you get the point.

Anyways remember how I said there will be ecchi? Well, heres some pics to get an understanding of how ecchi it would be. Please, if you are offended by such things don't read chapter 5. Instead go watch pokemon instead.

http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q109/HeroicHenry/Anime/1160280982487.jpg
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q109/HeroicHenry/Anime/1166211013196.gif
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LuNa_BLaNCa · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 7:16 pm Post subject:

<.< u can tell those links are there just to humiliate u cause of the title xD
"ecchi_is_bad".."Bad_4U"...etc xD hahaha so im not gonna bother...

And im not crazy!!! >.<
-bonks- it dd say it on ur siggy ;-;
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Long_Gun · Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 6:16 am Post subject:

aa> Yey! more pokemon!

lol

w/e hey, as long as there are no pics while im reading it, i dont care...

unlike some's story...i wont even click on the link to that thread anymore
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ultimasome · Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 6:46 am Post subject:

Kimmie-chan · Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 6:55 am Post subject:

Wednesday sounds good to me Very Happy

Bring it on! Wait... wednesday your time ... means thursday my time Rolling Eyes

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Long_Gun · Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 1:44 pm Post subject:

guess what...its wednesday American time, and i dont see any new chapter...

me thinks AA is haveing minor issues...
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LuNa_BLaNCa · Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:37 pm Post subject:

it is now thursday..my time and lil mans'........and still no story TT^TT

<.< wheres the story dammit! >.< post ir or else!

hehehe....jk! Razz

i wouldn't hurt ya....much =P ..cause i promised some i wouldn't. So ur lucky Rolling Eyes

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Long_Gun · Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 6:11 am Post subject:

i smell a riot...

hmm...

ima go grab a torch and pitchfork
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