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LuNa_BLaNCa LG Fan Girl

Joined: Dec 04, 2006 Posts: 3110 Location: <.<;..a haystack >.>
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 2:45 am Post subject: |
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Apocalypse reminds me of the Aztec years
lol i'll have to read more of the story to see if it really fits <-< is thae world really gonna end? o_O;
and yeah some "romance" scenes would be nice...but not that "looking into someones eyes and expressing ones love" yadda yadda luvy dovy stuff...something between the lines of the two main characters from "Open Sesame" would be kool just to show that these peeps are at least human XD _________________ [IMG:310]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v679/Glo0226/toki.jpg[/img]
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 2:49 am Post subject: |
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No, world isn't gonna end. But something else is.
The romance isn't something like that.
Don't expect Hollywood embrace and kissing which leads to *WOO-HOO*.
The romance won't be too direct. You'll see, patience young one. _________________
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trueline Pure Hope

Joined: Jun 13, 2006 Posts: 5134
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:04 am Post subject: |
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*ahem* after finishing my reading on chapter 1
well all i can say KEEP ON GOING
yes there are many things which need answers but couldnt found so its dark one and maybe it would be mystery unless u reveal them later in the other chapters.
I see its like gonna be mixed with army and military but i think u got effected from that movie ...uh..all the soul are one, its title, or something like that.
anyway interesting one but the title....is it going to be temporary one or u will stick to it? _________________
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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| I see its like gonna be mixed with army and military but i think u got effected from that movie ...uh..all the soul are one, its title, or something like that. |
Oh, I planned this out before I watched that movie "All Quiet on the Western Front".
You guys are free to discuss anything bout the story and give predictions and such. Ask any questions.
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| anyway interesting one but the title....is it going to be temporary one or u will stick to it? |
Most likely permanent. I'm not gonna bother with thinking a original tittle. Too lazy and tiring to think of. _________________
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ultimasome A-Source Great Mama!

Joined: Jun 21, 2006 Posts: 5630 Location: Inside food!
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:05 am Post subject: |
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the fisrt title was good why did ya changed it?
now i dont know if this isyour story or others story
so go get that title back
say does the title have any connection with the story? _________________ "Blogger" |
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 2 is delayed until further notice. I'm hoping to have it complete by the weekends then go through the editing and then adding in the insert music.
Update policy has changed from Weekly to Whenever I feel like it -______-
I'll be nice and give you kids another sneak peek.
Another Sneak Peek of Chapter 2:
Dave: Hey Captain! Is it true that you-
Angel: No. _________________
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ultimasome A-Source Great Mama!

Joined: Jun 21, 2006 Posts: 5630 Location: Inside food!
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:04 am Post subject: |
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then chapter 2 will be delayed and not only this
im not in there too
look AA when ya want to include me in there i think i'll read the whole story then cause im tired of the delay
first that and now this
why is that happening when the story includes me in?  _________________ "Blogger" |
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:46 pm Post subject: |
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Now now Some, be patience, I'm writing whenever I can.
I'm bad at describing machines and vehicles so I'll post of pictures for you guys to get an idea of how it looks. _________________
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Cherry-Kun Kami-Sama no Senshi & A-Source DJ

Joined: Dec 16, 2005 Posts: 5322 Location: wondering around
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:33 am Post subject: |
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AA>
*pokes*
oi
*pokes*
write
*pokes*
write you lazy angel!!!
*poke**poke*
i want to see me being a terrorist
xD _________________
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bigdave A-Source Moderator


Joined: Mar 24, 2006 Posts: 3732 Location: Hueco Mundo
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:06 pm Post subject: |
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AA>> hahaha!! I finally got around to reading!! ^___^
ITs pretty interesting story there AA!! So what am I a new recruit or something???
anyways keep on writing the story!!!!  _________________ (\__/)
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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Cherry- For godsakes your not a terrorist. Your an insane colonel (and maybe even a lolicon and shota pervert).
I might have it posted on Saturday/Sunday.
*poke with pokestick*
BD- Wait and see my young crazy child. Wait and see. _________________
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Kita-Asuna Ronin Samurai

Joined: Jan 31, 2007 Posts: 646 Location: Somewhere with a Sketchpad and pencil
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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this story is getting like whoa on the weirdness "scale" i dunno how to say it O.O
*prods* i' want 2nd chapter now!!!!
*prods again* Don't be lazy!~!!
*prods* sastify me!!! _________________ [IMG:400:150:03f161352f]http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2235/kitaassignaturejz2.jpg[/img:03f161352f] |
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bigdave A-Source Moderator


Joined: Mar 24, 2006 Posts: 3732 Location: Hueco Mundo
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:31 pm Post subject: |
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HAHAHA LOL Izumi has become a slave driver!!!! XD
U better get to working AA!!!!!! XD  _________________ (\__/)
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Kita-Asuna Ronin Samurai

Joined: Jan 31, 2007 Posts: 646 Location: Somewhere with a Sketchpad and pencil
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:38 pm Post subject: |
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don't say it like that bigdave you make me sound aggressive. I can be calm and polite too you know D:
*sits there quietly* _________________ [IMG:400:150:03f161352f]http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2235/kitaassignaturejz2.jpg[/img:03f161352f] |
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Angel_Armz Rosen Ritter~

Joined: Dec 05, 2006 Posts: 10983
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:27 pm Post subject: |
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I decided to give up on the music idea. Its hard finding the right music and to have it in sync with the reading.
I might have probably less than 5 insert music in the whole story. Maybe.
Chapter 2 will be posted this weekend. _________________
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