Zombie Horror

[CClark777]

Well this is my first time wrighting anything like this so please let me know how it is. I also dont have a name for it so....hmm mabey Ill name it later tell me the bad stuff and the good stuff

Chapter 1

It was really too early in the morning for me, but after all the noise last night and early this morning I guess the absence of sound woke me. I opened my eyes to see the pale blue light of the early morning shining through my window. The power somehow got turned off and my alarm clock with it. I sat up in the bed doing as I always did and stretched out to my tired body.

I got up out of the bed and headed toward the closet in my room were I kept my clothes. Opening the door sent a large red bag right into my face, knocking me down. Sitting there with the bag on my lap now I wondered “why this bag, the one that holds my past would fall from its place after three years?� I decided it was a painful memory and one best left were it was, in the past.

I got up, leaving the bag on floor of the closet, and proceeded to get a change of clothes. Shirt, jeans, socks, boxers. There was nothing unusual about what I got just my regular everyday clothes.

I headed toward the shower that was connected to my room and lit a couple of candles for light. As I stripped I prayed that the pilot light had not gone out. Turning on the shower reveled that it hadn’t, I guess this was all the luck that I was given for the day because that’s the best think that I can remember about it.

While in the shower my mind raced about the bag and the past. The one who owned the bag before me was the greatest person in my life, and will always be. They thought me how to hunt a long time ago, I can still remember the smell of the gun powder from that day.

I turned off the shower and began to dry off. I looked up, into the dew covered mirror to see a blurred image of myself. Taking a hand towel I cleared the image with a single swipe. There I looked at what I was, long hair that I had not trimmed for over three years now. Two solid gray eyes that fit the rough unshaven face that they were set on.

As I started to dress myself I heard a strange nose come from the front room. I left the bathroom and headed towered the hall that led to the kitten/living room area. As I entered the hallway I saw a girl on her knees, that couldn’t have been more than seventeen. Her white shirt was covered in blood, she also seemed to be in a state of shock, sitting there with her eyes open wide and a look of horror on her face.

I immediately stepped forward going to help the girl, but my view was soon obstructed by the horror that had frozen the girl stiff in horror. The monster slowly dragged it’s limbs closer to the terrified girl. Bloody drool oozing out of it’s hungry mouth. Its eyes were as white as snow, and the smell hit me like a ton of bricks. There were clumps of hair missing and bits of flesh.

My heart raced as I observed the monstrosity. I tried moving, but couldn’t, yelling out, but couldn’t. I stood there, frozen by fear, unable to do anything for the now helpless girl. Adrenalin started to flow through my body as my mind tried breaking the fear that held me in place. The monster now only a foot or two away from the girl stopped and let out a moan.

“Ahhhhhh�

Like breaking from a trans, the fear left as quickly as it had came. I quickly ran into the kitchen, keeping the creature in my site over the wet bar. I quickly opened the knife cabinet and reached under it for the gun that I had hid there. Grabbing it I pulled it out in front of me turning the safety off and took aim for the creatures head. It was just bending over to attack the girl when I pulled the trigger. BAM! The creature went upright from the force of the blow. The bullet had just grazed the side of its face ripping off flesh and muscle like it was nothing. The creature looked toward me and opened it’s mouth as to let out another moan. BAM! I didn’t give it a chance to moan a second time as I pulled the trigger. The second shot was a direct hit to the forehead. The backside of the creature’s head exploded as the bullet did it’s work.

My hands were now shaking as I held the gun, ready to shoot again. I let the weight of the gun take over and dropped it to the counter. I stood there in shock of what I had just done. My mind was racing over the events that had just occurred.

I quickly remembered the girl who had been sitting on the floor in front of the monster. I ran around the counter to were the girl and the now dead creature were. She hadn’t moved a muscle from when I last saw her. I slowly approached he fearing that she might be a creature too. I knelt down behind her and put my hand on here shoulder. Her entire body stiffened as I touched her. She slowly looked to see who or what had grabbed her.

“It’s OK. Every things going to be just fine now.� The words just came out of my mouth I didn’t even think about them.

Her eyes slowly rolled back into her head as she passed. I caught her as she fell over. Lifting the girl on my side I brought her over to my couch. Seeing all the blood on her clothes made me worry about her. I looked up from her and noticed that my front door was wide open. Stepping over the dead creature I shut and locked the front door. I was thinking about too many things to worry about how it had gotten open.

I went down the hall to my room were I got some sweats, a wet rag, and a blanket. On my way out of the room I noticed the bag, and then grabbed it too.

I changed the girl out of her bloody clothes and cleaned some of the blood off of her with the wet rag. After I had somehow managed to get the sweats on her I put the blanket over her and sat on the floor next to the couch. I looked at my watch, it was nine fifteen A.M.. A sight smile crossed my face a I wondered how much worse could the day get.

If only I knew.

[bigdave]

CLark>>> hmmmm I must say U got things off to a fast start!!! XD
for me the beginning was okay.

I think u should explain a little more on the main character unless ur going to do that during the course of the story. Of course there is the minor spelling errors but those were not a big problem for me since I knew what u were trying to say.

This reminds me of shawn of the dead!! XD lol
Very interesting story u got going here clark!
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[Angel_Armz]

[CClark777]

I haddent even thought about that XDThough that is were I would go if something like this happened. And Im not doing any thing like that in this. the guy just took a shower thats all