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pmhoa Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jul 03, 2004 Posts: 58 Location: Finland
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 7:22 am Post subject: Merry Christmas |
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Merry Christmas everyone!!!!
[/i]On the Left is Iori and Mature is on the right _________________
use the common sense like Sagara does |
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Jsy3k Cute Girl Lover


Joined: Aug 06, 2003 Posts: 3938 Location: I'm in deep sheet of cute girls
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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*Looks at the calendar*
It is 22 days early. _________________
Innocent Tranquility
The Smile that defies all thoughts of rationality[/ |
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celas Conscript

Joined: Nov 13, 2004 Posts: 179 Location: AZIA
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:38 pm Post subject: |
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*Looks at the calendar*
It is 22 days early. |
whow its never too early for x-mas =}  _________________ In the name of GOD, Impure souls of the living dead, shall be brought into eternal damnation.....AMEN! |
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ZoXArkXoZ A-Source Staff


Joined: Dec 07, 2002 Posts: 336 Location: Capital of the World -- NYC --
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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sigh... let's get some constructive comments guys. Early or not it's the month of Christmas so there's nothing wrong with that.
Anyway, nice pic pmh. Colors work really well to fit the background image and the concept is nice I was thinking of maybe doing something festive  _________________ [IMG:508:164:6c8e3c695e]http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/inqArk/Original_sig.jpg[/img:6c8e3c695e] |
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kenshin777 Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 10:28 am Post subject: |
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OK ^-^ ... constructive comment 1.
nice job on the actual faces and "body" ... but the only thing that i can suggest is to change the hair ... it is too low on the face ... if you were actually to continue and draw him as being bald his head would be taller than where his hair is ...
what i was always told is to remember that the hair does NOT go where the top of the head goes ... but sits on top of the head ... so you have to gove some lee-way for "Volume" for lack of a better word ...
on the girl it's not as much of a problem it's mainly just the male character
but other than that it's really nice  |
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afu Conscript

Joined: Oct 25, 2004 Posts: 142 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Looks great ^^ I love the concept of the image, very cute. Nice coloring as well. As for Iori's hair, I dont think it's that nessasary to change much since they are 'looking up' at the missle toe and the head's porportions change anyway... thoguh it is something to keep in mind when drawing ^^;; I think you might want to go easy on the dodge tool next time, the way they are 'glowing' apart from the bg is a bit distracting since it's so sharp/bold. XD |
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inorielle newbie!

Joined: Jun 16, 2004 Posts: 3
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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| for some reason, i like the way his body is glistening under the light... |
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